Al-Talaba SC has been listed as one of the
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Reviewer: BlackJack ( talk · contribs) 12:45, 25 May 2016 (UTC)
I'm happy to commence this review. Please contact me if there is anything else about the article I should be aware of. Thanks very much. Jack | talk page 12:45, 25 May 2016 (UTC)
First of all, there is no reason to even consider the "immediate failure" option because the only problem I had with the article, having read it a couple of times, was that it did not meet B-class standard in respect of English usage and grammar. That is only to be expected when the main editors use English as a second language. I have therefore copyedited the article myself to raise the standard of English to comply with the B-class criteria. The article already met the other five criteria except that one section has had to be reduced because of an unreliable source being cited several times; this has had minimal impact on the article overall as the content I removed was unimportant.
These are my comments in respect of the six GA criteria:
no problems with the prose, spelling or grammar; complies with MOS
very good work done re citations; ideally it would be nice to have more from books which would be a consideration if ever taken to FAN
coverage is good and in summary form without unnecessary detail
no bias at all with noticeably fair treatment, and much credit, given to rival teams
no problems
the images are relevant and have suitable captions
There is no doubt that this is a good article and great work has been done by Hashima20 and others. I will certainly support Al-Talaba in future if I am drawn into any discussions about Iraqi football . Well done. Jack | talk page 06:14, 27 May 2016 (UTC)
Al-Talaba SC has been listed as one of the
Sports and recreation good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: May 27, 2016. ( Reviewed version). |
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Reviewing |
Reviewer: BlackJack ( talk · contribs) 12:45, 25 May 2016 (UTC)
I'm happy to commence this review. Please contact me if there is anything else about the article I should be aware of. Thanks very much. Jack | talk page 12:45, 25 May 2016 (UTC)
First of all, there is no reason to even consider the "immediate failure" option because the only problem I had with the article, having read it a couple of times, was that it did not meet B-class standard in respect of English usage and grammar. That is only to be expected when the main editors use English as a second language. I have therefore copyedited the article myself to raise the standard of English to comply with the B-class criteria. The article already met the other five criteria except that one section has had to be reduced because of an unreliable source being cited several times; this has had minimal impact on the article overall as the content I removed was unimportant.
These are my comments in respect of the six GA criteria:
no problems with the prose, spelling or grammar; complies with MOS
very good work done re citations; ideally it would be nice to have more from books which would be a consideration if ever taken to FAN
coverage is good and in summary form without unnecessary detail
no bias at all with noticeably fair treatment, and much credit, given to rival teams
no problems
the images are relevant and have suitable captions
There is no doubt that this is a good article and great work has been done by Hashima20 and others. I will certainly support Al-Talaba in future if I am drawn into any discussions about Iraqi football . Well done. Jack | talk page 06:14, 27 May 2016 (UTC)