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The result was: promoted by
Rlink2 (
talk) 00:13, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
Converted from a redirect by Theleekycauldron ( talk). Self-nominated at 08:29, 15 March 2022 (UTC).
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Pretty interesting! Nice to see a character article that isn't an extended plot summary. I think it's almost good to go, but I see some refs are linked to "Paxton 2003", which seems to be a mistake as I see no such work in the bibliography, so please fix that. I would also recommend fleshing out the lead a bit more. Maybe link
Manic Pixie Dream Girl in ALT1? Overall, great work!
MSG17 (
talk) 00:58, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
Why this article doesnt have infobox image. 180.194.127.148 ( talk) 22:28, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
Gold sequin dress shown in the Creation and Development section has a bizarre caption forcing the image to match Procter's reference to wearing purple pants to the audition. Gold isn't purple. A dress isn't a pair of pants. Change the caption! Martindo ( talk) 21:12, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Rlink2 ( talk · contribs) 14:33, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
Will open up with comments shortly.
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here (I find that this way is easier than trying to "tq" everything I want to edit or add - my browser crashes alot and its harder for me to edit wikitext). Bolded and strikethough text is my opinion. Sometimes its a suggestion to replace something, other times its an invintation to write more or rephrase. You can reply to any of those concerns here.
Some off hand comments:
Regarding "mixed to positive" doesn't mixed imply positive and negative, so whats the need to write "positive"? COrrect me if I'm wrong.
I have to say, the referencing style is intersting. Can't say I've seen it before. But it works.
Overall, good work. Rlink2 ( talk) 14:57, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
Your prose review style is interesting, I may copy it for future runs.Feel free to do so. One time i had a very detailed and lengthy response to something on wiki typed up, I hit submit, and lost it all due to my not so good internet connection. I ought to switch browsers, but Firefox and Pale moon have their own problems. At least with the VE, if you hit submit and the connection fails, you don't lose your work. Off topic banter aside ....
make the edits you want, and show the changes as a Special:Diff linkYeah i was going to do that, but I forgot.
![]() | Ainsley Hayes has been listed as one of the
Media and drama good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: March 25, 2022. ( Reviewed version). |
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content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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![]() | A fact from Ainsley Hayes appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the
Did you know column on 29 March 2022 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
| ![]() |
The result was: promoted by
Rlink2 (
talk) 00:13, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
Converted from a redirect by Theleekycauldron ( talk). Self-nominated at 08:29, 15 March 2022 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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|
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
Pretty interesting! Nice to see a character article that isn't an extended plot summary. I think it's almost good to go, but I see some refs are linked to "Paxton 2003", which seems to be a mistake as I see no such work in the bibliography, so please fix that. I would also recommend fleshing out the lead a bit more. Maybe link
Manic Pixie Dream Girl in ALT1? Overall, great work!
MSG17 (
talk) 00:58, 17 March 2022 (UTC)
Why this article doesnt have infobox image. 180.194.127.148 ( talk) 22:28, 15 March 2022 (UTC)
Gold sequin dress shown in the Creation and Development section has a bizarre caption forcing the image to match Procter's reference to wearing purple pants to the audition. Gold isn't purple. A dress isn't a pair of pants. Change the caption! Martindo ( talk) 21:12, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewing |
Reviewer: Rlink2 ( talk · contribs) 14:33, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
Will open up with comments shortly.
Comments
here (I find that this way is easier than trying to "tq" everything I want to edit or add - my browser crashes alot and its harder for me to edit wikitext). Bolded and strikethough text is my opinion. Sometimes its a suggestion to replace something, other times its an invintation to write more or rephrase. You can reply to any of those concerns here.
Some off hand comments:
Regarding "mixed to positive" doesn't mixed imply positive and negative, so whats the need to write "positive"? COrrect me if I'm wrong.
I have to say, the referencing style is intersting. Can't say I've seen it before. But it works.
Overall, good work. Rlink2 ( talk) 14:57, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
Your prose review style is interesting, I may copy it for future runs.Feel free to do so. One time i had a very detailed and lengthy response to something on wiki typed up, I hit submit, and lost it all due to my not so good internet connection. I ought to switch browsers, but Firefox and Pale moon have their own problems. At least with the VE, if you hit submit and the connection fails, you don't lose your work. Off topic banter aside ....
make the edits you want, and show the changes as a Special:Diff linkYeah i was going to do that, but I forgot.