Early life section, "He received a Gold Medal for earning highest position that qualified him for a fellowship from the same university." Does this mean that he received the medal for having the highest score on the tests for graduating? And that this allowed him to get a fellowship from the same university? [Fixed]
Research contributions section. Could the second paragraph be expanded? Were his arguments about the Indus Valley Civilizations (first sentence) going against the common theories of the time? What did he do to revive the relationship (second sentence)? [Improved]
Awards and honors, "Dani also scored highest in his batch". What is a batch? [Fixed]
Overall a nice article! There are a few things that need to be taken care of before it is of GA status, but they shouldn't take too long to address. Please let me know if you have any questions.
Dana boomer (
talk) 15:58, 1 November 2009 (UTC)reply
Thanks for very useful comments. I have tried to address all your concerns.--IslesCapeTalk 19:59, 4 November 2009 (UTC)reply
Thank you for your work. I have made a couple more tweaks, and am now going to pass the article. As a further suggestion for improvement, whether you want to take the article to A-class or FA status or just to improve it more, would be to reference the career, positions, and awards sections. These sections do not include controversial info, direct quotations or statistics, so they do not need to be referenced for GA status, but I am fairly sure it will be insisted on for A-class or FA.
Dana boomer (
talk) 00:13, 5 November 2009 (UTC)reply
Early life section, "He received a Gold Medal for earning highest position that qualified him for a fellowship from the same university." Does this mean that he received the medal for having the highest score on the tests for graduating? And that this allowed him to get a fellowship from the same university? [Fixed]
Research contributions section. Could the second paragraph be expanded? Were his arguments about the Indus Valley Civilizations (first sentence) going against the common theories of the time? What did he do to revive the relationship (second sentence)? [Improved]
Awards and honors, "Dani also scored highest in his batch". What is a batch? [Fixed]
Overall a nice article! There are a few things that need to be taken care of before it is of GA status, but they shouldn't take too long to address. Please let me know if you have any questions.
Dana boomer (
talk) 15:58, 1 November 2009 (UTC)reply
Thanks for very useful comments. I have tried to address all your concerns.--IslesCapeTalk 19:59, 4 November 2009 (UTC)reply
Thank you for your work. I have made a couple more tweaks, and am now going to pass the article. As a further suggestion for improvement, whether you want to take the article to A-class or FA status or just to improve it more, would be to reference the career, positions, and awards sections. These sections do not include controversial info, direct quotations or statistics, so they do not need to be referenced for GA status, but I am fairly sure it will be insisted on for A-class or FA.
Dana boomer (
talk) 00:13, 5 November 2009 (UTC)reply