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Reviewer: JCAla ( talk · contribs) 17:12, 25 January 2012 (UTC)
I am reviewing the article. A preliminary review will be posted soon. Regards, JCAla ( talk) 17:12, 25 January 2012 (UTC)
The article is very well written and truely informative. But there are still some things to be done, I put my comments below.
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"Jibril then stepped down to make place for elections and was succeeded as interim prime minister by Abdurrahim El-Keib after a brief period in which his deputy, Ali Tarhouni, assumed his duties."
"On 23 January 2012, the town of Bani Walid was captured by local militia fighters."
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"According to interim interior minister Fawzi Abdelali, the authorities are planning to integrate 50,000 former rebels in the security forces ..."
"According to a report by the Secretary-General of the United Nations, up to 7,000 people, including women and children, are being held in in private jails outside the control of the NTC, "with no access to due process in the absence of a functioning police and judiciary". Many of the prisoners are being subjected to torture and systematic abuse, and there are reports of "women held in detention in the absence of female guards and under male supervision, and of children detained alongside adults." A large number of the detainees are sub-Saharan Africans, in some cases accused or suspected of being pro-Gaddafi mercenaries, and some individuals were "being targeted because of the colour of their skin"."
"In the months following the Libyan uprising, the Sahel region saw thousands of combatants originating from Mali and Niger, ..."
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"According to Sallabi, the party is not Islamist, but respects the general principles of Islam and Libyan culture."
"The party has the backing of the head of the Tripoli Military Council, Abdelhakim Belhadj, as well as tribal leaders and members of the NTC."
"A statement from the group said the party was an "Islamist party committed to the principles of Islamic sharia", aiming to work for establishing a state based on institutions. The chairman of the party, Khaled al-Wershefani, said the group aimed "to focus on national unity and build a Libyan state which is modern, civilized and developed and which does not exclude or marginalize anyone.""
"Jalil called for patience and promised that personal details and official information of all government officials would be published publicly on the Internet in time.[68] On 21 December, Jalil called on former rebel fighters to produce a list of potential candidates to join the NTC, saying seven to nine would be accepted as members of the interim body."
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"On 21 January 2012, hundreds of protesters stormed the NTC's headquarters in Benghazi, protesting the speed of reforms and lack of transparency from the interim government. When the head of the NTC, Mustafa Abdul Jalil, appeared to address the crowd, the protesters began throwing bottles at him."
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"Most oil companies has deployed small teams to restart production."
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So, are we done here or is there more to fix? Review appears to be abandoned on both sides? Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:30, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: JCAla ( talk · contribs) 17:12, 25 January 2012 (UTC)
I am reviewing the article. A preliminary review will be posted soon. Regards, JCAla ( talk) 17:12, 25 January 2012 (UTC)
The article is very well written and truely informative. But there are still some things to be done, I put my comments below.
**Please put a Done next to every point you have amended, or put a Not done next to ones you have not done, with a reason.**
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"Jibril then stepped down to make place for elections and was succeeded as interim prime minister by Abdurrahim El-Keib after a brief period in which his deputy, Ali Tarhouni, assumed his duties."
"On 23 January 2012, the town of Bani Walid was captured by local militia fighters."
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"According to interim interior minister Fawzi Abdelali, the authorities are planning to integrate 50,000 former rebels in the security forces ..."
"According to a report by the Secretary-General of the United Nations, up to 7,000 people, including women and children, are being held in in private jails outside the control of the NTC, "with no access to due process in the absence of a functioning police and judiciary". Many of the prisoners are being subjected to torture and systematic abuse, and there are reports of "women held in detention in the absence of female guards and under male supervision, and of children detained alongside adults." A large number of the detainees are sub-Saharan Africans, in some cases accused or suspected of being pro-Gaddafi mercenaries, and some individuals were "being targeted because of the colour of their skin"."
"In the months following the Libyan uprising, the Sahel region saw thousands of combatants originating from Mali and Niger, ..."
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"According to Sallabi, the party is not Islamist, but respects the general principles of Islam and Libyan culture."
"The party has the backing of the head of the Tripoli Military Council, Abdelhakim Belhadj, as well as tribal leaders and members of the NTC."
"A statement from the group said the party was an "Islamist party committed to the principles of Islamic sharia", aiming to work for establishing a state based on institutions. The chairman of the party, Khaled al-Wershefani, said the group aimed "to focus on national unity and build a Libyan state which is modern, civilized and developed and which does not exclude or marginalize anyone.""
"Jalil called for patience and promised that personal details and official information of all government officials would be published publicly on the Internet in time.[68] On 21 December, Jalil called on former rebel fighters to produce a list of potential candidates to join the NTC, saying seven to nine would be accepted as members of the interim body."
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"On 21 January 2012, hundreds of protesters stormed the NTC's headquarters in Benghazi, protesting the speed of reforms and lack of transparency from the interim government. When the head of the NTC, Mustafa Abdul Jalil, appeared to address the crowd, the protesters began throwing bottles at him."
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"Most oil companies has deployed small teams to restart production."
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So, are we done here or is there more to fix? Review appears to be abandoned on both sides? Wizardman Operation Big Bear 16:30, 23 March 2012 (UTC)