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Reviewer: DanielleTH ( talk · contribs) 20:45, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
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Papenbrook's image is under the correct license. Both images of Adrien have good rationales and are a good size. Captions are great, especially on the one of Cat Noir, more than justifying its placement.
Overall, great job on the article. Awaiting your changes. DanielleTH (Say hi!) 02:21, 20 January 2019 (UTC)
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DanielleTH: Hello and thank you for reviewing the article! I have tried to make all the aforementioned changes. All I would like to add is:
- Yes, Astruc was quoted there; I attributed the sentence to him;
- Instead of "the two main characters" or "the two main leads", I wrote "the two lead characters";
- Yes, Adrien's Miraculous is called the Cat Miraculous, thank you for pointing this out;
- In Marinette's article, the word "superhero" was linked back in the lead after I had removed the links (including this one), so for now I have linked it once again in the infobox, caption, and body of the article; I have also linked the word in Adrien's article in order to maintain a sense of continuity between the two articles; I know that the word "superhero" is widely known by the readers, but maybe it should be kept linked in both articles since it is important to their subjects. Flowerpiep ( talk) 18:19, 21 January 2019 (UTC)Flowerpiep
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Okay, let's get this done!
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Papenbrook's image is under the correct license. Both images of Adrien have good rationales and are a good size. Captions are great, especially on the one of Cat Noir, more than justifying its placement.
Overall, great job on the article. Awaiting your changes. DanielleTH (Say hi!) 02:21, 20 January 2019 (UTC)
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DanielleTH: Hello and thank you for reviewing the article! I have tried to make all the aforementioned changes. All I would like to add is:
- Yes, Astruc was quoted there; I attributed the sentence to him;
- Instead of "the two main characters" or "the two main leads", I wrote "the two lead characters";
- Yes, Adrien's Miraculous is called the Cat Miraculous, thank you for pointing this out;
- In Marinette's article, the word "superhero" was linked back in the lead after I had removed the links (including this one), so for now I have linked it once again in the infobox, caption, and body of the article; I have also linked the word in Adrien's article in order to maintain a sense of continuity between the two articles; I know that the word "superhero" is widely known by the readers, but maybe it should be kept linked in both articles since it is important to their subjects. Flowerpiep ( talk) 18:19, 21 January 2019 (UTC)Flowerpiep