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1) In the section Adolfo Rodríguez Saá#Governor is the following sentence:
While "laicism" is a word (see [1]), it is an unusual word. Wiktionary gives "secularism" as the synonym. If "laicism" is to be used there, I think it should be linked, perhaps to a Wikipedia article. I linked it to Separation of church and state, but changed my mind and took the link out (I got confused and thought it was the opposite, then realized it wasn't). So here are several possibilities:
and there may be others.
2) The last sentence in the section Adolfo Rodríguez Saá#Governor is:
"Non-aligned" is not usually used in English to refer to a political figure of a different political party, so the phrase "as it was ruled by a non-aligned mayor" doesn't convey much to the reader. You could say that the mayor was a political rival, or a member of a different (or an opposing) political party. You could also re-phrase it and say (if it is true), "in order to dilute the power of the mayor, a member of an opposing political party" (or even name the mayor's political party); you can't say this if it's not true, and you should provide a source if it is true and you want to say this. But perhaps it's not that important, and if that's the case, you can just leave the phrase out.
I'm going to re-word this. Corinne ( talk) 15:41, 5 October 2015 (UTC) I changed it to, "the mayor was a member of an opposing party". If, however, there was only one opposing political party, this should be changed to: "the mayor was a member of the opposing party" (and perhaps the party could be mentioned, too). Corinne ( talk) 15:45, 5 October 2015 (UTC)
3) In the third paragraph in the section "Early life" is the following sentence:
The word "deputees" is unusual in English. The more common word is "deputy", plural "deputies". I'm not sure that is the best word to use, either. Do you mean "party members", "[elected] representatives", or perhaps "political appointees", or "cronies"? Corinne ( talk) 01:56, 4 October 2015 (UTC) I changed it to "deputies". Corinne ( talk) 19:34, 4 October 2015 (UTC)
Dank I'd appreciate your help here. Corinne ( talk) 19:36, 4 October 2015 (UTC)
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I will be picking up the review of this one - both for the Wiki Cup and the GA cup as well. I will be making my review comments over the next couple of days.
Side note, I would love some input on a Featured List candidate ( Mexican National Light Heavyweight Championship) and a Featured Article candidate ( CMLL World Heavyweight Championship). I am not asking for Quid pro Quo, but all help is appreciated. MPJ -US 13:07, 27 March 2016 (UTC)
I like to get this checked out first, I have found issues using this that has led to quick fails so it's important this passes muster.
"The new president completed de la Rúa's term of office." - not sure what that means?
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This article is being copy-edited in response to a request posted at Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Requests#Rodríguez Saá. I will post any questions or concerns I have here.
1) In the section Adolfo Rodríguez Saá#Governor is the following sentence:
While "laicism" is a word (see [1]), it is an unusual word. Wiktionary gives "secularism" as the synonym. If "laicism" is to be used there, I think it should be linked, perhaps to a Wikipedia article. I linked it to Separation of church and state, but changed my mind and took the link out (I got confused and thought it was the opposite, then realized it wasn't). So here are several possibilities:
and there may be others.
2) The last sentence in the section Adolfo Rodríguez Saá#Governor is:
"Non-aligned" is not usually used in English to refer to a political figure of a different political party, so the phrase "as it was ruled by a non-aligned mayor" doesn't convey much to the reader. You could say that the mayor was a political rival, or a member of a different (or an opposing) political party. You could also re-phrase it and say (if it is true), "in order to dilute the power of the mayor, a member of an opposing political party" (or even name the mayor's political party); you can't say this if it's not true, and you should provide a source if it is true and you want to say this. But perhaps it's not that important, and if that's the case, you can just leave the phrase out.
I'm going to re-word this. Corinne ( talk) 15:41, 5 October 2015 (UTC) I changed it to, "the mayor was a member of an opposing party". If, however, there was only one opposing political party, this should be changed to: "the mayor was a member of the opposing party" (and perhaps the party could be mentioned, too). Corinne ( talk) 15:45, 5 October 2015 (UTC)
3) In the third paragraph in the section "Early life" is the following sentence:
The word "deputees" is unusual in English. The more common word is "deputy", plural "deputies". I'm not sure that is the best word to use, either. Do you mean "party members", "[elected] representatives", or perhaps "political appointees", or "cronies"? Corinne ( talk) 01:56, 4 October 2015 (UTC) I changed it to "deputies". Corinne ( talk) 19:34, 4 October 2015 (UTC)
Dank I'd appreciate your help here. Corinne ( talk) 19:36, 4 October 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: MPJ-DK ( talk · contribs) 13:07, 27 March 2016 (UTC)
I will be picking up the review of this one - both for the Wiki Cup and the GA cup as well. I will be making my review comments over the next couple of days.
Side note, I would love some input on a Featured List candidate ( Mexican National Light Heavyweight Championship) and a Featured Article candidate ( CMLL World Heavyweight Championship). I am not asking for Quid pro Quo, but all help is appreciated. MPJ -US 13:07, 27 March 2016 (UTC)
I like to get this checked out first, I have found issues using this that has led to quick fails so it's important this passes muster.
"The new president completed de la Rúa's term of office." - not sure what that means?
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