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Reviewer: Ed! ( talk · contribs) 16:16, 2 December 2011 (UTC) reply

  • Dabs are fine, but there's a problem with one of the external links.
    • Deleted the text and link.
  • "At full capacity, she could steam for 1,200 nautical miles (2,200 km; 1,400 mi) at a speed of 14 knots (26 km/h; 16 mph). The ship's crew numbered 630 officers and men." - this sounds like it's referring to one ship. Does it refer to all of the ships in the class or only the two which were completed? Specify.
    • Changed the punctuation.
  • Any idea of ship costs?
    • Unfortunately, no.
That's all. — Ed! (talk) 16:16, 2 December 2011 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the review.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 18:09, 2 December 2011 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Ed! ( talk · contribs) 16:16, 2 December 2011 (UTC) reply

  • Dabs are fine, but there's a problem with one of the external links.
    • Deleted the text and link.
  • "At full capacity, she could steam for 1,200 nautical miles (2,200 km; 1,400 mi) at a speed of 14 knots (26 km/h; 16 mph). The ship's crew numbered 630 officers and men." - this sounds like it's referring to one ship. Does it refer to all of the ships in the class or only the two which were completed? Specify.
    • Changed the punctuation.
  • Any idea of ship costs?
    • Unfortunately, no.
That's all. — Ed! (talk) 16:16, 2 December 2011 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the review.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 18:09, 2 December 2011 (UTC) reply


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