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Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk) 17:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
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This is a nice and well referenced article.
The is a small and compact article. There isn't many problems with it but I will only focus on the problems with the article. The Adar oifield sounds interesting. I'll take up this review although I have some real life stuff to do today, I'll leave some comments in a couple of hours. Jaguar ( talk) 17:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
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Anybody American I think.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:50, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
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This is a small and well referenced article that has very few problems. The small lead was the only main problem with the article, but now the lead has certainly improved. Also, there are very few pictures, but this is no major concern for GA - I also understand that it would be a bit hard trying to take pictures of the Adar Yale in South Sudan! Don't worry about that.
It shouldn't take long to solve those minor copyediting issues, so once they have been addressed I will be happy to grant this GA status. Jaguar ( talk) 10:37, 22 August 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, I will look over this this afternoon. Yes photos are always nice, but South Sudan unfortunately falls into the African category where photos are extremely rare even on the Internet..♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:45, 22 August 2011 (UTC)
Minor copyedits have been made. I've reread it and it seems to be an effective decent summary of this oilfield now I think and should be good enough for GA if you do a google search on it, pretty well covered I think. Shame we don't have a photograph of the site but it is South Sudan after all. ♦ Dr. Blofeld 14:00, 22 August 2011 (UTC)
There have been a lot of improvements to the article and now it definately meets the GA criteria. The lead now complies per WP:LEAD and the article contains a lot of interesting information which makes it very easy to read. Don't worry about that photos, I'm assuming that even anyone taking pictures in the Adar oilfield would get in trouble due to the political activity! Other than that, very well done on building another Good Article! Jaguar ( talk) 16:07, 22 August 2011 (UTC)
Should we subject this article to peer review? Lbertolotti ( talk) 15:07, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk) 17:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
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This is a nice and well referenced article.
The is a small and compact article. There isn't many problems with it but I will only focus on the problems with the article. The Adar oifield sounds interesting. I'll take up this review although I have some real life stuff to do today, I'll leave some comments in a couple of hours. Jaguar ( talk) 17:09, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
Lead:
Background and location:
Development and production:
Anybody American I think.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:50, 21 August 2011 (UTC)
People:
Security:
This is a small and well referenced article that has very few problems. The small lead was the only main problem with the article, but now the lead has certainly improved. Also, there are very few pictures, but this is no major concern for GA - I also understand that it would be a bit hard trying to take pictures of the Adar Yale in South Sudan! Don't worry about that.
It shouldn't take long to solve those minor copyediting issues, so once they have been addressed I will be happy to grant this GA status. Jaguar ( talk) 10:37, 22 August 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, I will look over this this afternoon. Yes photos are always nice, but South Sudan unfortunately falls into the African category where photos are extremely rare even on the Internet..♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:45, 22 August 2011 (UTC)
Minor copyedits have been made. I've reread it and it seems to be an effective decent summary of this oilfield now I think and should be good enough for GA if you do a google search on it, pretty well covered I think. Shame we don't have a photograph of the site but it is South Sudan after all. ♦ Dr. Blofeld 14:00, 22 August 2011 (UTC)
There have been a lot of improvements to the article and now it definately meets the GA criteria. The lead now complies per WP:LEAD and the article contains a lot of interesting information which makes it very easy to read. Don't worry about that photos, I'm assuming that even anyone taking pictures in the Adar oilfield would get in trouble due to the political activity! Other than that, very well done on building another Good Article! Jaguar ( talk) 16:07, 22 August 2011 (UTC)
Should we subject this article to peer review? Lbertolotti ( talk) 15:07, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
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