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Many thanks for taking this on. I'll respond promptly to any questions. Chiswick Chap ( talk) 08:52, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
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Animals achieve active camouflage both by color change and (among marine animals such as squid) by counter-illuminationv. Prose:
There are two mechanisms of active camouflage in animals: Counter-illumination, and color change— any reason for change in order or "Counter-illumination" and "color change"
"a wide range of background textures"— the prose does not make clear where this quote comes from
during World War IIv. Prose:
Second World War— consistency needen
of the United States of America— should be "of the United States"
OLEDsis never used again in the prose. Do we need to specify the acronym?
PAO
counter-illuminationis linked twice in the prose.
That is it! – Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 16:28, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
Retrieved March 27, 2012v.
Retrieved 2017-01-09— inconsistent date format
1046–8— better would be "1046–1048"
That is it. Putting on hold. – Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 16:35, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
Kavyansh.Singh – Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap ( talk) 17:01, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
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Chiswick Chap (
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Many thanks for taking this on. I'll respond promptly to any questions. Chiswick Chap ( talk) 08:52, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
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Animals achieve active camouflage both by color change and (among marine animals such as squid) by counter-illuminationv. Prose:
There are two mechanisms of active camouflage in animals: Counter-illumination, and color change— any reason for change in order or "Counter-illumination" and "color change"
"a wide range of background textures"— the prose does not make clear where this quote comes from
during World War IIv. Prose:
Second World War— consistency needen
of the United States of America— should be "of the United States"
OLEDsis never used again in the prose. Do we need to specify the acronym?
PAO
counter-illuminationis linked twice in the prose.
That is it! – Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 16:28, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
Retrieved March 27, 2012v.
Retrieved 2017-01-09— inconsistent date format
1046–8— better would be "1046–1048"
That is it. Putting on hold. – Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 16:35, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
Kavyansh.Singh – Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap ( talk) 17:01, 8 January 2022 (UTC)