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RN casualties can be found for HMS Avon Vale here and for HMS Wheatland here - indicating no casualties on 1/2 November 1944.-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 19:42, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Nick-D ( talk · contribs) 11:48, 19 June 2013 (UTC)
I'll post a review of this article over the next few days. Nick-D ( talk) 11:48, 19 June 2013 (UTC)
This is a great article on an interesting engagement - great work. I have the following comments:
Thank you very much for taking time to review this article. I think I have now addressed the above issues (although I need some feedback on a couple of those), and I'll address any further concerns right away.-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 12:47, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
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Shouldn't measurement units be consistent?
"their four-inch (100 mm) guns" " 37-millimetre (1.5 in)"
Citations after quotes?
""northern" and the "southern"" ""Ghost Fleet of Pag"" And shouldnt that be THE ghost fleet of pag?
Please address these points, thanks ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 01:14, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
Regarding citations after quotes, It was my understanding of the GA criteria and the MOS that quotes required citations directly after them. I may be wrong though but thats how I have always done my reviews. Let me know what you think ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 09:06, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
I was under the impression that citations needed to be directly after any quotes. But i'll leave that to the primary reviewer, Nick-D to decide. And your translation of the source is fine with me. ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 09:18, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
One more thing for consistency, some of the flags in the infobox link and some of them don't. Shouldn't they all link? ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 09:19, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
I was not able to find any source for this codename. Actully I do not understand the double definition. All source for this operation brings essentially to this: /info/en/?search=Operation_Wikinger — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2.236.121.22 ( talk) 23:51, 23 December 2015 (UTC)
In Freivogel, Zvonimir & Rastelli, Achille (2015). Adriatic Naval War 1940–1945 p. 428, it states that the British operation to intercept these ships was codenamed Operation Exterminate. There is no other article with that title on en WP (there is a film article, titled 008: Operation Exterminate but a hatnote will deal with that), and I think it is significantly superior to an "Action of" title. Of course, O'Hara's "Ambush off Pag Island" is also an option, but I consider that Freivogel & Rastelli, being a more recent and specialised source than O'Hara, is probably better. Thoughts? Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 10:12, 2 March 2022 (UTC)
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RN casualties can be found for HMS Avon Vale here and for HMS Wheatland here - indicating no casualties on 1/2 November 1944.-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 19:42, 13 June 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Nick-D ( talk · contribs) 11:48, 19 June 2013 (UTC)
I'll post a review of this article over the next few days. Nick-D ( talk) 11:48, 19 June 2013 (UTC)
This is a great article on an interesting engagement - great work. I have the following comments:
Thank you very much for taking time to review this article. I think I have now addressed the above issues (although I need some feedback on a couple of those), and I'll address any further concerns right away.-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 12:47, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Shouldn't measurement units be consistent?
"their four-inch (100 mm) guns" " 37-millimetre (1.5 in)"
Citations after quotes?
""northern" and the "southern"" ""Ghost Fleet of Pag"" And shouldnt that be THE ghost fleet of pag?
Please address these points, thanks ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 01:14, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
Regarding citations after quotes, It was my understanding of the GA criteria and the MOS that quotes required citations directly after them. I may be wrong though but thats how I have always done my reviews. Let me know what you think ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 09:06, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
I was under the impression that citations needed to be directly after any quotes. But i'll leave that to the primary reviewer, Nick-D to decide. And your translation of the source is fine with me. ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 09:18, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
One more thing for consistency, some of the flags in the infobox link and some of them don't. Shouldn't they all link? ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 09:19, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
I was not able to find any source for this codename. Actully I do not understand the double definition. All source for this operation brings essentially to this: /info/en/?search=Operation_Wikinger — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2.236.121.22 ( talk) 23:51, 23 December 2015 (UTC)
In Freivogel, Zvonimir & Rastelli, Achille (2015). Adriatic Naval War 1940–1945 p. 428, it states that the British operation to intercept these ships was codenamed Operation Exterminate. There is no other article with that title on en WP (there is a film article, titled 008: Operation Exterminate but a hatnote will deal with that), and I think it is significantly superior to an "Action of" title. Of course, O'Hara's "Ambush off Pag Island" is also an option, but I consider that Freivogel & Rastelli, being a more recent and specialised source than O'Hara, is probably better. Thoughts? Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 10:12, 2 March 2022 (UTC)