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In the lead, P2, S2: the word superior could easily be taken as POV; perhaps it could be changed to something like "numerically superior" or something else that conveys the same idea without the potential baggage of the current word.
Really just the one issue with the word superior; I see no reason why this won't pass when that is resolved. Great job on the article! —
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In the lead, P2, S2: the word superior could easily be taken as POV; perhaps it could be changed to something like "numerically superior" or something else that conveys the same idea without the potential baggage of the current word.
Really just the one issue with the word superior; I see no reason why this won't pass when that is resolved. Great job on the article! —
Bellhalla (
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01:57, 4 May 2009 (UTC)reply