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Reviewer: AJona1992 ( talk) 17:54, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
"The origins of the Ace in the Hole go back to the band "Stoney Ridge," which was composed of Southwest Texas State University (now Texas State University) students Ron Cabal (lead guitar), Mike Daily (steel guitar), Terry Hale (Bass guitar), Tommy Foote (drums) and Jay Dominguez (lead vocals). Dominguez and Foote left the band after graduating in 1975, prompting a search for a new singer." - source?
"The band regularly performed at Cheatham Street Warehouse in San Marcos, Texas, where they debuted on October 13, 1975 along with new member Ted Stubblefield, who replaced Foote as the drummer. Acts such as Asleep at the Wheel and Jerry Jeff Walker also played at the forum." - source?
"Drummer Foote returned to the lineup late in 1975" needs re-wording. Maybe something like this "Drummer Foote returned to the band in late 1975"?
"and the Strait-penned" - can you explain what this means?
"Bill Mabry was added to the lineup" - do you really have to say "lineup" why not "had joined the band" or equivalent?
"Strait re-recorded "Right or Wrong" in 1983 for his album Right or Wrong" - what about... Strait re-recorded "Right or Wrong" in 1983 for his album of the same name ?
"and took it to number one on the country charts" - needs re-wording. Maybe something like this... which peaked at number one on the country charts.
The article seems ok to me, however, its very short. I'm going to ✗ Fail the nomination, until further development can be made. If there are books out there about them, try adding some information and sources to this article. Thirdly, this article needs more sources to verify claims. I had wrote down these notes while reading this article, when you have addressed the concerns I had stated, please first ask for a peer review. This can help at a better chance for a good article status. Thank you, AJona1992 ( talk) 18:30, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
The origins of the Ace in the Hole go back to the band "Stoney Ridge," which was composed of Southwest Texas State University (now Texas State University) students Ron Cabal (lead guitar), Mike Daily ( steel guitar), Terry Hale ( Bass guitar), Tommy Foote ( drums) and Jay Dominguez (lead vocals). Dominguez and Foote left the band after graduating in 1975, prompting a search for a new singer. The band members posted bulletins around the Southwest Texas campus, [1] which were noticed by an interested George Strait, who at the time was an Agricultural science student. He contacted the band and was hired after an audition. Soon afterwards, the group was renamed "Ace in the Hole". [1]
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin ( talk · contribs) 15:49, 1 December 2011 (UTC)
Will review it in the next days
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Reviewer: AJona1992 ( talk) 17:54, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
"The origins of the Ace in the Hole go back to the band "Stoney Ridge," which was composed of Southwest Texas State University (now Texas State University) students Ron Cabal (lead guitar), Mike Daily (steel guitar), Terry Hale (Bass guitar), Tommy Foote (drums) and Jay Dominguez (lead vocals). Dominguez and Foote left the band after graduating in 1975, prompting a search for a new singer." - source?
"The band regularly performed at Cheatham Street Warehouse in San Marcos, Texas, where they debuted on October 13, 1975 along with new member Ted Stubblefield, who replaced Foote as the drummer. Acts such as Asleep at the Wheel and Jerry Jeff Walker also played at the forum." - source?
"Drummer Foote returned to the lineup late in 1975" needs re-wording. Maybe something like this "Drummer Foote returned to the band in late 1975"?
"and the Strait-penned" - can you explain what this means?
"Bill Mabry was added to the lineup" - do you really have to say "lineup" why not "had joined the band" or equivalent?
"Strait re-recorded "Right or Wrong" in 1983 for his album Right or Wrong" - what about... Strait re-recorded "Right or Wrong" in 1983 for his album of the same name ?
"and took it to number one on the country charts" - needs re-wording. Maybe something like this... which peaked at number one on the country charts.
The article seems ok to me, however, its very short. I'm going to ✗ Fail the nomination, until further development can be made. If there are books out there about them, try adding some information and sources to this article. Thirdly, this article needs more sources to verify claims. I had wrote down these notes while reading this article, when you have addressed the concerns I had stated, please first ask for a peer review. This can help at a better chance for a good article status. Thank you, AJona1992 ( talk) 18:30, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
The origins of the Ace in the Hole go back to the band "Stoney Ridge," which was composed of Southwest Texas State University (now Texas State University) students Ron Cabal (lead guitar), Mike Daily ( steel guitar), Terry Hale ( Bass guitar), Tommy Foote ( drums) and Jay Dominguez (lead vocals). Dominguez and Foote left the band after graduating in 1975, prompting a search for a new singer. The band members posted bulletins around the Southwest Texas campus, [1] which were noticed by an interested George Strait, who at the time was an Agricultural science student. He contacted the band and was hired after an audition. Soon afterwards, the group was renamed "Ace in the Hole". [1]
Ace in the Hole Band was one of the Music good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
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This article must adhere to the biographies of living persons (BLP) policy, even if it is not a biography, because it contains material about living persons. Contentious material about living persons that is unsourced or poorly sourced must be removed immediately from the article and its talk page, especially if potentially libellous. If such material is repeatedly inserted, or if you have other concerns, please report the issue to this noticeboard.If you are a subject of this article, or acting on behalf of one, and you need help, please see this help page. |
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Reviewer: AJona1992 ( talk) 17:54, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
"The origins of the Ace in the Hole go back to the band "Stoney Ridge," which was composed of Southwest Texas State University (now Texas State University) students Ron Cabal (lead guitar), Mike Daily (steel guitar), Terry Hale (Bass guitar), Tommy Foote (drums) and Jay Dominguez (lead vocals). Dominguez and Foote left the band after graduating in 1975, prompting a search for a new singer." - source?
"The band regularly performed at Cheatham Street Warehouse in San Marcos, Texas, where they debuted on October 13, 1975 along with new member Ted Stubblefield, who replaced Foote as the drummer. Acts such as Asleep at the Wheel and Jerry Jeff Walker also played at the forum." - source?
"Drummer Foote returned to the lineup late in 1975" needs re-wording. Maybe something like this "Drummer Foote returned to the band in late 1975"?
"and the Strait-penned" - can you explain what this means?
"Bill Mabry was added to the lineup" - do you really have to say "lineup" why not "had joined the band" or equivalent?
"Strait re-recorded "Right or Wrong" in 1983 for his album Right or Wrong" - what about... Strait re-recorded "Right or Wrong" in 1983 for his album of the same name ?
"and took it to number one on the country charts" - needs re-wording. Maybe something like this... which peaked at number one on the country charts.
The article seems ok to me, however, its very short. I'm going to ✗ Fail the nomination, until further development can be made. If there are books out there about them, try adding some information and sources to this article. Thirdly, this article needs more sources to verify claims. I had wrote down these notes while reading this article, when you have addressed the concerns I had stated, please first ask for a peer review. This can help at a better chance for a good article status. Thank you, AJona1992 ( talk) 18:30, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
The origins of the Ace in the Hole go back to the band "Stoney Ridge," which was composed of Southwest Texas State University (now Texas State University) students Ron Cabal (lead guitar), Mike Daily ( steel guitar), Terry Hale ( Bass guitar), Tommy Foote ( drums) and Jay Dominguez (lead vocals). Dominguez and Foote left the band after graduating in 1975, prompting a search for a new singer. The band members posted bulletins around the Southwest Texas campus, [1] which were noticed by an interested George Strait, who at the time was an Agricultural science student. He contacted the band and was hired after an audition. Soon afterwards, the group was renamed "Ace in the Hole". [1]
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin ( talk · contribs) 15:49, 1 December 2011 (UTC)
Will review it in the next days
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Reviewer: AJona1992 ( talk) 17:54, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
"The origins of the Ace in the Hole go back to the band "Stoney Ridge," which was composed of Southwest Texas State University (now Texas State University) students Ron Cabal (lead guitar), Mike Daily (steel guitar), Terry Hale (Bass guitar), Tommy Foote (drums) and Jay Dominguez (lead vocals). Dominguez and Foote left the band after graduating in 1975, prompting a search for a new singer." - source?
"The band regularly performed at Cheatham Street Warehouse in San Marcos, Texas, where they debuted on October 13, 1975 along with new member Ted Stubblefield, who replaced Foote as the drummer. Acts such as Asleep at the Wheel and Jerry Jeff Walker also played at the forum." - source?
"Drummer Foote returned to the lineup late in 1975" needs re-wording. Maybe something like this "Drummer Foote returned to the band in late 1975"?
"and the Strait-penned" - can you explain what this means?
"Bill Mabry was added to the lineup" - do you really have to say "lineup" why not "had joined the band" or equivalent?
"Strait re-recorded "Right or Wrong" in 1983 for his album Right or Wrong" - what about... Strait re-recorded "Right or Wrong" in 1983 for his album of the same name ?
"and took it to number one on the country charts" - needs re-wording. Maybe something like this... which peaked at number one on the country charts.
The article seems ok to me, however, its very short. I'm going to ✗ Fail the nomination, until further development can be made. If there are books out there about them, try adding some information and sources to this article. Thirdly, this article needs more sources to verify claims. I had wrote down these notes while reading this article, when you have addressed the concerns I had stated, please first ask for a peer review. This can help at a better chance for a good article status. Thank you, AJona1992 ( talk) 18:30, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
The origins of the Ace in the Hole go back to the band "Stoney Ridge," which was composed of Southwest Texas State University (now Texas State University) students Ron Cabal (lead guitar), Mike Daily ( steel guitar), Terry Hale ( Bass guitar), Tommy Foote ( drums) and Jay Dominguez (lead vocals). Dominguez and Foote left the band after graduating in 1975, prompting a search for a new singer. The band members posted bulletins around the Southwest Texas campus, [1] which were noticed by an interested George Strait, who at the time was an Agricultural science student. He contacted the band and was hired after an audition. Soon afterwards, the group was renamed "Ace in the Hole". [1]