The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Spinningspark ( talk · contribs) 12:39, 7 November 2014 (UTC)
The nominator of this article does not appear to be currently active (she allowed
another recent GA nomination to fail after it got to a point where it was on the point of being passed with one relatively minor fixable issue) so I will restrict my initial comments to a few general remarks on the lead. If someone wants to do the work on the article, then please make yourself known and I will do a full review. Otherwise I will fail it in a few days time.
The lead is deficient in that it does not fully reflect the content of the article. The first section is mostly about the Hubble parameter which is not mentioned. A lot of space is given in the body to models other than dark energy, but these are not even mentioned in the lead. The lead makes the claim that dark energy is the most widely accepted explanation, but this claim is does not appear in the body and is not cited anywhere. The section "Theories for the consequences to the universe" does not appear to be covered in the lead at all. Spinning Spark 12:39, 7 November 2014 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Spinningspark ( talk · contribs) 12:39, 7 November 2014 (UTC)
The nominator of this article does not appear to be currently active (she allowed
another recent GA nomination to fail after it got to a point where it was on the point of being passed with one relatively minor fixable issue) so I will restrict my initial comments to a few general remarks on the lead. If someone wants to do the work on the article, then please make yourself known and I will do a full review. Otherwise I will fail it in a few days time.
The lead is deficient in that it does not fully reflect the content of the article. The first section is mostly about the Hubble parameter which is not mentioned. A lot of space is given in the body to models other than dark energy, but these are not even mentioned in the lead. The lead makes the claim that dark energy is the most widely accepted explanation, but this claim is does not appear in the body and is not cited anywhere. The section "Theories for the consequences to the universe" does not appear to be covered in the lead at all. Spinning Spark 12:39, 7 November 2014 (UTC)