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Hi, there is too much quoted material, the United Nations quote is a third of the article and needs to be changed to reworded prose such as " The United Nations view of Abu Luqman is" with a reference. Atlantic306 ( talk) 17:30, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
alright, i fixed it. reworked the UN info into a prose history of his roles within IS — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dave8899 ( talk • contribs) 23:56, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
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Hi, there is too much quoted material, the United Nations quote is a third of the article and needs to be changed to reworded prose such as " The United Nations view of Abu Luqman is" with a reference. Atlantic306 ( talk) 17:30, 18 July 2016 (UTC)
alright, i fixed it. reworked the UN info into a prose history of his roles within IS — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dave8899 ( talk • contribs) 23:56, 18 July 2016 (UTC)