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Reviewer: Eurohunter ( talk · contribs) 15:03, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
@ Magiciandude: I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter ( talk) 15:21, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
So I did most of what you asked except for the following: The capitalization of foreign-language is dependent on what reliable English-language sources say. Reviewers have it as "Abriendo Puertas". Looking at FA-class articles, there's no need to mention the duration, the previous and following single on the body of the article, the track listing is fine as that's how others have it. For the website part, putting website in place of publisher would italicize them which isn't recommended for websites like AllMusic. Erick ( talk) 21:10, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
Hello Erick, I'm going to finish the review. I'm not sure what pace I'll take, but should be able to wrap up by the end of the week. The previous reviewer seems to have covered prose so I will likely skip that, unless there are sections that you would like another set of eyes on. Rjjiii ( talk) 03:16, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
Source spot-checking: [1]
"Emilio Estefan, Producer Settle". Sun-Sentinel. March 23, 2002.Reliable source, verifies everything from "which was" to the citation. Release date and title of the album, can be verified from the album.
Promis, Jose F. "Abriendo Puertas - Gloria Estefan". AllMusic.Citing the staff article which is accepted from AllMusic. Verifies the sentence.
O'Brien, Jon (September 25, 2020). "Gloria Estefan's 'Abriendo Puertas' Turns 25". Grammy.Reliable source, verifies the sentence.
Cabrera, Juan Fermin (June 29, 1995). "Estefan Records in Spanish Once Again". New York Daily News. p. 21E.Reliable source verifies the sentence.
Raquel, Diana (September 7, 1995). "Aqui y Alla: Humberto Ramirez llega a Orlando". La Prensa de San Antonio (in Spanish). p. 17.Reliable source only seems to verify "vallenato"; this is fine because the other citation verifies the rest of the sentence.
"Abriendo Puertas". El Tiempo (in Spanish). November 21, 1995.This one stuck out to me when scanning the article's quotations because the quote is in English and the source in Spanish. It says
Todos estos elementos y ritmos trabajan muy bien cuando son mezclados.which does verify the sentence but I don't think it makes sense to attribute "works well" here, since it has been translated and then re-phrased for grammar.
Aside from the one issue with the "quote" cited to source 13, I don't see any copyright violations, plagiarism, or failed verification. Looking good so far, Rjjiii ( talk) 04:09, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
Image review:
That's the only image used; it just needs the alt parameter filled out. Rjjiii ( talk) 04:15, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
Scanning for minor prose concerns and NPOV issues but not major changes to prose:
The song received positive reactions from three music critics, who mostly praised the instruments.This makes it sound like only 3 critics had a positive reaction to the song.
The song is a vallenato track with a mix Son cubano andgrammar
The accompanying music video interspeds Estefan performing while farmers are growing their crops.I'm not sure from the location if this refers to a music video for the 1995 song, or the 2020 version. Do any sources note the significance of the farmers to the song?
It was also recognized as on the best-performing songs of the year...grammar
Those are the only things I noticed. All of the opinions were clearly attributed to sources. Rjjiii ( talk) 04:29, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
@ Magiciandude: I've noted some minor issues above. Most of the issues from the first reviewer have been addressed, and the suggestions that were not acted upon (like a fair use audio sample) are not part of the GA criteria. Rjjiii ( talk) 03:57, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Eurohunter ( talk · contribs) 15:03, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
@ Magiciandude: I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter ( talk) 15:21, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
So I did most of what you asked except for the following: The capitalization of foreign-language is dependent on what reliable English-language sources say. Reviewers have it as "Abriendo Puertas". Looking at FA-class articles, there's no need to mention the duration, the previous and following single on the body of the article, the track listing is fine as that's how others have it. For the website part, putting website in place of publisher would italicize them which isn't recommended for websites like AllMusic. Erick ( talk) 21:10, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
Hello Erick, I'm going to finish the review. I'm not sure what pace I'll take, but should be able to wrap up by the end of the week. The previous reviewer seems to have covered prose so I will likely skip that, unless there are sections that you would like another set of eyes on. Rjjiii ( talk) 03:16, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
Source spot-checking: [1]
"Emilio Estefan, Producer Settle". Sun-Sentinel. March 23, 2002.Reliable source, verifies everything from "which was" to the citation. Release date and title of the album, can be verified from the album.
Promis, Jose F. "Abriendo Puertas - Gloria Estefan". AllMusic.Citing the staff article which is accepted from AllMusic. Verifies the sentence.
O'Brien, Jon (September 25, 2020). "Gloria Estefan's 'Abriendo Puertas' Turns 25". Grammy.Reliable source, verifies the sentence.
Cabrera, Juan Fermin (June 29, 1995). "Estefan Records in Spanish Once Again". New York Daily News. p. 21E.Reliable source verifies the sentence.
Raquel, Diana (September 7, 1995). "Aqui y Alla: Humberto Ramirez llega a Orlando". La Prensa de San Antonio (in Spanish). p. 17.Reliable source only seems to verify "vallenato"; this is fine because the other citation verifies the rest of the sentence.
"Abriendo Puertas". El Tiempo (in Spanish). November 21, 1995.This one stuck out to me when scanning the article's quotations because the quote is in English and the source in Spanish. It says
Todos estos elementos y ritmos trabajan muy bien cuando son mezclados.which does verify the sentence but I don't think it makes sense to attribute "works well" here, since it has been translated and then re-phrased for grammar.
Aside from the one issue with the "quote" cited to source 13, I don't see any copyright violations, plagiarism, or failed verification. Looking good so far, Rjjiii ( talk) 04:09, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
Image review:
That's the only image used; it just needs the alt parameter filled out. Rjjiii ( talk) 04:15, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
Scanning for minor prose concerns and NPOV issues but not major changes to prose:
The song received positive reactions from three music critics, who mostly praised the instruments.This makes it sound like only 3 critics had a positive reaction to the song.
The song is a vallenato track with a mix Son cubano andgrammar
The accompanying music video interspeds Estefan performing while farmers are growing their crops.I'm not sure from the location if this refers to a music video for the 1995 song, or the 2020 version. Do any sources note the significance of the farmers to the song?
It was also recognized as on the best-performing songs of the year...grammar
Those are the only things I noticed. All of the opinions were clearly attributed to sources. Rjjiii ( talk) 04:29, 29 October 2023 (UTC)
@ Magiciandude: I've noted some minor issues above. Most of the issues from the first reviewer have been addressed, and the suggestions that were not acted upon (like a fair use audio sample) are not part of the GA criteria. Rjjiii ( talk) 03:57, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
|alt=
parameter), and the "works well" quote,
Rjjiii (
talk)
04:14, 1 November 2023 (UTC)