"About a Girl" was re-recorded to feature the vocals of new member Jade Ewen and the removal of the vocals by ex-member Buchanan for the release of Sweet 7 in 2010. ... It needs clarification. —
Tomica(talk)18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)reply
although the middle eight has a "90s dance-inspired" feel to it ---> with its middle eight also containing some "90s dance-inspired" feel to it. —
Tomica(talk)12:17, 11 February 2012 (UTC)reply
Aside from number 1, I fixed them all. Digital Spy includes the name in the title so no reason to remove.
Till I Go Home (
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It looks awkward having the Digital Spy, two times in the references, but nevermind its your choice here. I am passing the article. Next time, this is well intentioned advice, work more on the references, before nominating the article, and of course keep the good work like now:D ! —
Tomica(talk)10:32, 14 February 2012 (UTC)reply
"About a Girl" was re-recorded to feature the vocals of new member Jade Ewen and the removal of the vocals by ex-member Buchanan for the release of Sweet 7 in 2010. ... It needs clarification. —
Tomica(talk)18:58, 8 February 2012 (UTC)reply
although the middle eight has a "90s dance-inspired" feel to it ---> with its middle eight also containing some "90s dance-inspired" feel to it. —
Tomica(talk)12:17, 11 February 2012 (UTC)reply
Aside from number 1, I fixed them all. Digital Spy includes the name in the title so no reason to remove.
Till I Go Home (
talk)
It looks awkward having the Digital Spy, two times in the references, but nevermind its your choice here. I am passing the article. Next time, this is well intentioned advice, work more on the references, before nominating the article, and of course keep the good work like now:D ! —
Tomica(talk)10:32, 14 February 2012 (UTC)reply