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Reviewer: Miyagawa ( talk · contribs) 20:23, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
Ok, put me down for a review for this one. Fringe will be a nice change, and this way you'll have a review waiting for you when you're back around. :) Miyagawa ( talk) 20:23, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
Plot: "discovers that Jones believes she is one of her soldiers in his war" - a bit confusing as I'm not sure who it is referring to here.
Production: Might be worth noting that Jared Harris returned later in the series as well (although I don't think you need to go into the detail about his return being due to the timeline being altered - that might take the article off track a little!).
Three duplicate links, all in the last two paragraphs of the Production section. Image licence is fine.
Other than that, this all looks good. One of the really memorable episodes of Fringe from the first season for me - although I admit I didn't realise it was this one when I started the review! It's the bomb with the lights and David Robert Jones that made this one so good, plus the twist with the typewriter at the end. It felt like this was the start of Olivia's character arc that continued throughout the rest of the series. Miyagawa ( talk) 07:55, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Miyagawa ( talk · contribs) 20:23, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
Ok, put me down for a review for this one. Fringe will be a nice change, and this way you'll have a review waiting for you when you're back around. :) Miyagawa ( talk) 20:23, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
Plot: "discovers that Jones believes she is one of her soldiers in his war" - a bit confusing as I'm not sure who it is referring to here.
Production: Might be worth noting that Jared Harris returned later in the series as well (although I don't think you need to go into the detail about his return being due to the timeline being altered - that might take the article off track a little!).
Three duplicate links, all in the last two paragraphs of the Production section. Image licence is fine.
Other than that, this all looks good. One of the really memorable episodes of Fringe from the first season for me - although I admit I didn't realise it was this one when I started the review! It's the bomb with the lights and David Robert Jones that made this one so good, plus the twist with the typewriter at the end. It felt like this was the start of Olivia's character arc that continued throughout the rest of the series. Miyagawa ( talk) 07:55, 9 June 2013 (UTC)