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Reviewer: The Rambling Man ( talk · contribs) 20:58, 2 September 2021 (UTC) reply

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• Merge first and second para of lead.
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• "Martin began" -> He began...
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• "with Conference South club" non-League.
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• "He joined Coventry" re-joined...
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• "with Bournemouth at" no longer A.F.C. but just AFC.
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• Is there an article for loan?
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• "Saints manager" not sure our readers know who "Saints" are.
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• "2010–11 campaign" campaign inside pipe link. Same for subsequent "season"/"campaign" links.
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• "in the FA Cup on" third round of
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• "substitute" link.
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• "was signed Martin then" comma after signed.
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• "as the Eagles manager" not sure who those are.
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• "League One side Coventry City, where" overlinked.
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• "impressed Sky Blues" who?
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• "transfer embargo" link?
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• "at set pieces and" link.
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• "in English football history" I guess this is in professional football?
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• "his penalty when" link penalty kick.
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• "free transfer" is there a link?
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• "family home in Southampton." overlinked.
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• " 6 feet 3 inches " adj=on.
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• BBC Sport consistent format/link in refs.
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• Ref 8 en-dash.
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• Refs 13, 48, too.
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• Ref 22, Southampton F.C. linked, no other publisher/works linked.
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That's all I have. The Rambling Man ( Keep wearing the mask...) 11:17, 3 September 2021 (UTC) reply

• • Excellent, many thanks. Echetus Xe 19:24, 4 September 2021 (UTC) reply