I split it up because end-of-year lists and awards are generally placed at the end of the reception section whereas comments from single/album reviews are at the beginning. Candyo3220:50, 21 April 2011 (UTC)reply
"The song has been certified Gold in the United States by the Recording Industry Association of America for shipments of 500,000 copies." - no citation here
Music video
The first sentence is a bit fluffy. How about "The music video, directed by Chris Dooley, was shot on location in Lucerne Valley, California and premiered on September 3, 2010..."?
Selena Gomez→Gomez
Done.
Bill Lamb→Lamb
Since he's not the main subject of the article and techinically being reintroducted in this section, shouldn't his full name and what he's writing for be noted again?
"They performed the song on January 5, 2011, and afterwards awarded the Choice award for Favorite Breakout Artist" - needs a complete rewrite. The context is not given
Would it be fine to leave it in the context as adding would need another column specifying what version of the song is being released, and taking into consideration that the release history isn't even a part of WP:SONGS. Before I revamped the article the release history was already here. Candyo3220:50, 21 April 2011 (UTC)reply
I split it up because end-of-year lists and awards are generally placed at the end of the reception section whereas comments from single/album reviews are at the beginning. Candyo3220:50, 21 April 2011 (UTC)reply
"The song has been certified Gold in the United States by the Recording Industry Association of America for shipments of 500,000 copies." - no citation here
Music video
The first sentence is a bit fluffy. How about "The music video, directed by Chris Dooley, was shot on location in Lucerne Valley, California and premiered on September 3, 2010..."?
Selena Gomez→Gomez
Done.
Bill Lamb→Lamb
Since he's not the main subject of the article and techinically being reintroducted in this section, shouldn't his full name and what he's writing for be noted again?
"They performed the song on January 5, 2011, and afterwards awarded the Choice award for Favorite Breakout Artist" - needs a complete rewrite. The context is not given
Would it be fine to leave it in the context as adding would need another column specifying what version of the song is being released, and taking into consideration that the release history isn't even a part of WP:SONGS. Before I revamped the article the release history was already here. Candyo3220:50, 21 April 2011 (UTC)reply