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Reviewer: Bilorv ( talk · contribs) 18:06, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
I'll take this one. — Bilorv ( talk) 18:06, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
As you say, the article is on the short side for GA in both prose and reference list. I think there are two things missing for broadness (3(a)):
I also found another review (note that Shana Nys Dambrot appears to be an established, reputable critic).
I'd like to see at least a couple more paragraphs on these topics.
I'm satisfied with the reliability of sources. I've spotchecked Tiny Mix Tapes, Create Digital Music, MusicRadar, Lee (2018) and The New York Times. My only issues are with the last:
Mr. Ikeda's composition wasn't limited to the stereo systems; it also took advantage of the cars' headlights, horns and roaring engines.
I'm happy with the free images used. I won't require it for GA but, rather than a potentially non-free extract from the performance, I'd like to see a "multiple audio" box of a note A playing on an electronic piano for 5 seconds at different frequencies (maybe even the 6 listed).
This is formally on hold for 7 days but if progress is still being made there can be some leeway with this. —
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Reviewer: Bilorv ( talk · contribs) 18:06, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
I'll take this one. — Bilorv ( talk) 18:06, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
As you say, the article is on the short side for GA in both prose and reference list. I think there are two things missing for broadness (3(a)):
I also found another review (note that Shana Nys Dambrot appears to be an established, reputable critic).
I'd like to see at least a couple more paragraphs on these topics.
I'm satisfied with the reliability of sources. I've spotchecked Tiny Mix Tapes, Create Digital Music, MusicRadar, Lee (2018) and The New York Times. My only issues are with the last:
Mr. Ikeda's composition wasn't limited to the stereo systems; it also took advantage of the cars' headlights, horns and roaring engines.
I'm happy with the free images used. I won't require it for GA but, rather than a potentially non-free extract from the performance, I'd like to see a "multiple audio" box of a note A playing on an electronic piano for 5 seconds at different frequencies (maybe even the 6 listed).
This is formally on hold for 7 days but if progress is still being made there can be some leeway with this. —
Bilorv (
talk)
22:08, 24 August 2023 (UTC)