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Reviewer: JPxG ( talk · contribs) 01:39, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
I'll do my best. Vroom vroom jp× g 01:39, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
Boy, this sure is a huge-ass and well written article about a cool-ass car. Here is my whole deal:
been created under time pressure in parallel with the Bizzarrini Manta show car
Why is "show car" italicized?
AMC looked for a possibility to have the technology of the mid-engine sports car constructed by
"sought to have the technology"? What does "the technology" specifically refer to?
development helper
This doesn't seem like a very good caption.
All wheels are suspended on double wishbones single.
"All wheels are suspended singly on double wishbones"? This whole part is strange: it says each wheel has coil springs and double shocks, and at the rear, the springs and shocks are each doubled. Is this saying each rear wheel has two separate coil springs and four shocks???
The handcrafted sheet steel hatchback body is joined to the floor pan to form a self-supporting. Unit welded. With a height of 1.10 m, it is very flat, but exceptionally wide at 1.92 m.
I accidentally the whole self-supporting. I assume this is supposed to be "unibody". I don't know what "unit-welded" refers to here. Since this is an American car, the height should be in a {{ convert}} template.
4.5-liter
This should be {{ convert}}ed.
A quarter of a year later
"Three months"?
"a real gem" (a real gem).
??
Salvatore Diomante sold it in 1971 in incomplete condition to Giorgio Giordanengo, who runs a business restoring classic Italian sports cars
Since this was 50 years ago, it seems unlikely that he still runs the business.
This car was a milestone. It was born out of a unique project that brought together some of the brightest minds in the automotive world of the late 1960s and 1970s.[19]
This should be formatted as a <blockquote></blockquote> and attributed to who said it in-text, not just with a citation.
description of the third chassis of the AMX/3 on the website amx3.organd
description-of-the-fourth-chassis-of-the-AMX/3 on the website amx3.orgought to be formatted properly or put in {{ cite web}} templates that have the URL, title, website, author, and date (can usually be found in the source of a webpage or through image filenames if it isn't listed in plain text). For example, https://amx3.org/chassis-2/ doesn't have a date, but in the source of the page we see
<meta property="article:published_time" content="2019-07-29T16:22:48+00:00" />. I would put this as <ref name="chassis02">{{cite web|url=https://amx3.org/chassis-2/|title=Chassis No. 02 – AMC AMX/3|website=amx3.org|date=2019-07-29}}</ref>.
Such as the Ferrari 250 GTO, the A.T.S. GT (Wolfgang Blaube: Six against Enzolooks like it belongs in "Notes".
Anyway, this is a pretty cool article and I'm glad that it exists. Thanks for submitting it to GAN!
jp× g 03:29, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
Chicago Tribune of 22 November 1969, p. 7as a citation, is there no title or author? Other things should be formatted differently: for example,
Example textshould be
Example text. In general, the examples at Template:Cite_web#Title illustrate what I am talking about here: the
titleparameter should just be the title of the page§ (either the one displayed on the page, or what shows up in the title bar when you navigate to it), not a description of what the page is. There are 99 references, so this might be a pain in the ass (I prefer to use list-defined references for this reason), but it shouldn't take too long to go through the ones that are citing improper page titles and fix them. The ones you've done so far are good. jp× g 02:49, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
title=Short description of AMC AMX/3 on the website www.ultimatecarpage.comshould be
title=AMC AMC/3|website=Ultimatecarpage.com... taking a look at the rest now. jp× g 10:59, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
looked for a possibility to have the technology of the mid-engine sports car constructed, and the part where it talks about the rear suspension is still unclear. Is it saying that there are four or eight shock absorbers on the rear? There are some undercarriage photos you can find online and see what the deal is but I would recommend finding an actual source that says in text what the deal is. Additionally, the blockquote ("
This car was a milestone [...]") doesn't have any attribution. Who said that? There are also a few minor things (like "8 millionlire" not being spaced); most issues are fixed, but I'd recommend going over the whole thing with a fine-toothed comb. jp× g 20:35, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
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I'll do my best. Vroom vroom jp× g 01:39, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
Boy, this sure is a huge-ass and well written article about a cool-ass car. Here is my whole deal:
been created under time pressure in parallel with the Bizzarrini Manta show car
Why is "show car" italicized?
AMC looked for a possibility to have the technology of the mid-engine sports car constructed by
"sought to have the technology"? What does "the technology" specifically refer to?
development helper
This doesn't seem like a very good caption.
All wheels are suspended on double wishbones single.
"All wheels are suspended singly on double wishbones"? This whole part is strange: it says each wheel has coil springs and double shocks, and at the rear, the springs and shocks are each doubled. Is this saying each rear wheel has two separate coil springs and four shocks???
The handcrafted sheet steel hatchback body is joined to the floor pan to form a self-supporting. Unit welded. With a height of 1.10 m, it is very flat, but exceptionally wide at 1.92 m.
I accidentally the whole self-supporting. I assume this is supposed to be "unibody". I don't know what "unit-welded" refers to here. Since this is an American car, the height should be in a {{ convert}} template.
4.5-liter
This should be {{ convert}}ed.
A quarter of a year later
"Three months"?
"a real gem" (a real gem).
??
Salvatore Diomante sold it in 1971 in incomplete condition to Giorgio Giordanengo, who runs a business restoring classic Italian sports cars
Since this was 50 years ago, it seems unlikely that he still runs the business.
This car was a milestone. It was born out of a unique project that brought together some of the brightest minds in the automotive world of the late 1960s and 1970s.[19]
This should be formatted as a <blockquote></blockquote> and attributed to who said it in-text, not just with a citation.
description of the third chassis of the AMX/3 on the website amx3.organd
description-of-the-fourth-chassis-of-the-AMX/3 on the website amx3.orgought to be formatted properly or put in {{ cite web}} templates that have the URL, title, website, author, and date (can usually be found in the source of a webpage or through image filenames if it isn't listed in plain text). For example, https://amx3.org/chassis-2/ doesn't have a date, but in the source of the page we see
<meta property="article:published_time" content="2019-07-29T16:22:48+00:00" />. I would put this as <ref name="chassis02">{{cite web|url=https://amx3.org/chassis-2/|title=Chassis No. 02 – AMC AMX/3|website=amx3.org|date=2019-07-29}}</ref>.
Such as the Ferrari 250 GTO, the A.T.S. GT (Wolfgang Blaube: Six against Enzolooks like it belongs in "Notes".
Anyway, this is a pretty cool article and I'm glad that it exists. Thanks for submitting it to GAN!
jp× g 03:29, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
Chicago Tribune of 22 November 1969, p. 7as a citation, is there no title or author? Other things should be formatted differently: for example,
Example textshould be
Example text. In general, the examples at Template:Cite_web#Title illustrate what I am talking about here: the
titleparameter should just be the title of the page§ (either the one displayed on the page, or what shows up in the title bar when you navigate to it), not a description of what the page is. There are 99 references, so this might be a pain in the ass (I prefer to use list-defined references for this reason), but it shouldn't take too long to go through the ones that are citing improper page titles and fix them. The ones you've done so far are good. jp× g 02:49, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
title=Short description of AMC AMX/3 on the website www.ultimatecarpage.comshould be
title=AMC AMC/3|website=Ultimatecarpage.com... taking a look at the rest now. jp× g 10:59, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
looked for a possibility to have the technology of the mid-engine sports car constructed, and the part where it talks about the rear suspension is still unclear. Is it saying that there are four or eight shock absorbers on the rear? There are some undercarriage photos you can find online and see what the deal is but I would recommend finding an actual source that says in text what the deal is. Additionally, the blockquote ("
This car was a milestone [...]") doesn't have any attribution. Who said that? There are also a few minor things (like "8 millionlire" not being spaced); most issues are fixed, but I'd recommend going over the whole thing with a fine-toothed comb. jp× g 20:35, 14 March 2021 (UTC)