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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 17:49, 19 August 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B.
MoS compliance for
lead,
layout,
words to watch,
fiction, and
lists:
- Lede too short. It needs to summarize the entire article. Place of publication for refs would be nice, but not required for GA.
- Done, lead expanded, added location for refs where available.
Poliocretes (
talk)
12:55, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
- Cites not normally required in lede unless making statements or claims not backed up by the main body; don't think that's the case here. I combined the first two paragraphs to improve flow.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk)
01:01, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
- Right, I removed all cites from the lead, save for one which references a quote not repeated in the body. Poliocretes ( talk) 09:04, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
- Cites not normally required in lede unless making statements or claims not backed up by the main body; don't think that's the case here. I combined the first two paragraphs to improve flow.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk)
01:01, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
- Done, lead expanded, added location for refs where available.
Poliocretes (
talk)
12:55, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
- Lede too short. It needs to summarize the entire article. Place of publication for refs would be nice, but not required for GA.
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and
verifiable?
- A.
References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C.
No original research:
- A.
References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it
neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No
edit wars, etc:
- No
edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain
images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
- Might move the Catalina picture up to the relevant section, probably best on the left side.
- Done. Poliocretes ( talk) 12:55, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
- Might move the Catalina picture up to the relevant section, probably best on the left side.
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 17:49, 19 August 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B.
MoS compliance for
lead,
layout,
words to watch,
fiction, and
lists:
- Lede too short. It needs to summarize the entire article. Place of publication for refs would be nice, but not required for GA.
- Done, lead expanded, added location for refs where available.
Poliocretes (
talk)
12:55, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
- Cites not normally required in lede unless making statements or claims not backed up by the main body; don't think that's the case here. I combined the first two paragraphs to improve flow.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk)
01:01, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
- Right, I removed all cites from the lead, save for one which references a quote not repeated in the body. Poliocretes ( talk) 09:04, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
- Cites not normally required in lede unless making statements or claims not backed up by the main body; don't think that's the case here. I combined the first two paragraphs to improve flow.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk)
01:01, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
- Done, lead expanded, added location for refs where available.
Poliocretes (
talk)
12:55, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
- Lede too short. It needs to summarize the entire article. Place of publication for refs would be nice, but not required for GA.
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and
verifiable?
- A.
References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C.
No original research:
- A.
References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it
neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No
edit wars, etc:
- No
edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain
images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
- Might move the Catalina picture up to the relevant section, probably best on the left side.
- Done. Poliocretes ( talk) 12:55, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
- Might move the Catalina picture up to the relevant section, probably best on the left side.
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail: