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Sturmvogel 66 (
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20:29, 11 July 2019 (UTC)
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I'll get to this shortly.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
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20:29, 11 July 2019 (UTC)
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No DABs, external links OK
Images properly licensed
In what ways was a motor division weaker than a normal infantry division?
I have expanded the sentence to further clarify.
EnigmaMcmxc (
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17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
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As a result of the evacuation, the division, proper, did not leave Britain. If it had been alerted to leave, you need to say so. Otherwise this sentence doesn't make sense
I have reworded, does this work?
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17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
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First World War vintage hyphen between War and vintage and here large scale attack and here first phase objectives
Hyphens added
EnigmaMcmxc (
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17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
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132nd Brigade, during the Battle of France remove the comma
removed
EnigmaMcmxc (
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17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
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British 61st divisions capitalize divisions
fixed
EnigmaMcmxc (
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17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
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The 59th Division supported comma after division
added
EnigmaMcmxc (
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17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
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In more than one place, you haven't capitalized battalion, forex 5th battalion
I believe I have added this
EnigmaMcmxc (
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17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
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following day, United States's First Army "the American" reads better
Amended
EnigmaMcmxc (
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17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
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Capitalize the first B in bailey bridge
Amended
EnigmaMcmxc (
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17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
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Link squadron--
Sturmvogel 66 (
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02:19, 31 July 2019 (UTC)
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Added link.
Thanks once again for the review
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17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
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