52 (album series) was nominated as a Music good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (May 17, 2024, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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The result was: promoted by
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talk 21:09, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
Created by Panini! ( talk). Self-nominated at 19:10, 19 October 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/52 (album series); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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QPQ: Done. |
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The article is long enough and old enough. The hooks are interesting. I'm not certain about the image requirements. The one issue that stands out to me is that one quotation in the article isn't cited or listed in the closest ref, which I've noted in-line. Otherwise, this is looking good!
Significa liberdade (
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Nominator: Panini! ( talk · contribs) 18:16, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: IanTEB ( talk · contribs) 16:26, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
I think this article is generally well-written but I have some concerns about the abundance of primary interview sources. I’ll give a full review but will request a second opinion, hopefully from an editor with more GA reviews and nominations than me; this is only my second review.
with Andrew Hyra as the duo alternative folk rock band Billy Pilgrim" - I think duo can be removed here
Bush's 50th birthday coincided with the day the United States government mandated lockdowns in response to the COVID-19 pandemic." I would cut this sentence since it doesn’t seem to lead into anything
Bush originally planned to release the songs independently; always anticipating someone would appear to greenlight a project to that scale, he finally accepted that "no one was coming" and he would need to put the idea into motion on his own. He called the CEO of Big Machine Records Scott Borchetta, the label for Sugarland, and explained the idea to him, simply so he was aware of what he was doing.[5] To Bush's surprise Borchetta was intrigued and supported the project.” I recommend cutting this down. Perhaps something like “
Not finding a label for the project, Bush planned to release the series on his own. He contacted Scott Borchetta, the CEO of Sugarland’s label Big Machine Records, and explained the project to keep him updated with his plans. To Bush's surprise, Borchetta was intrigued and supported the project" would be good
He described the podcast as "the liner notes I always wish I had, with the person that I always wished had written them."” For promotional stuff like this I don’t think it’s recommended to keep full quotes; I would remove it entirely
9 of the 10 on the album were co-written” Assuming you mean “
9 of the 10 songs”?
The blend was inspired from a live performance” I think this should specificy blend of country and R&B
energy with a unique blend of country music” Remove “unique” here for NPOV
He noticed that the country music emphasized "the song" and the R&B instrumentation emphasized "the energy".” I would cut this. If it was from a secondary journalist I think comments like this are good, but with primary sourcing it almost feels vague and non-neutral
’Tennessee Plates’ was written in 2016 following the death of his father, Jack Bush” Remove the name of his father since he doesn’t have an article and is not mentioned by name again
encouraged Bush to comfortable discussing death in music” change to “to be comfortable” or “to feel comfortable”
Flynn appreciated the depth of the lyrics and believed they are just as strong without the music” remove this for NPOV, comments like this should ideally only be used from secondary sources
features positive instrumentation and writing” maybe change “positive” to a more neutral adjective like happy or upbeat
"a beach song with a smile on it. When you play even a sad song of Kristian's, it's a sad song with a smile on it."” I would prefer to remove everything after the first sentence of the quote
The lyrics of the song are a reflection of emotions associated with summer” what song is this referring to? or do you mean songs plural?
"Sailing to Arizona"'s lyrics were written to be an anthem of taking chances” Anthem feels a little POV (even if it is attributed), maybe you could change it to something else?
The album focuses on its melodies and themes of true love” “its” can be removed
The title is derived from the lyrics last song on the album,” do you mean “from the lyrics to the last song on the album”?
’New Year's resolution #7’ consists of a list of what he wanted to change about himselfchange first “he” to “Bush”.
singer, songwriter, and record producer” change “singer, songwriter” to singer-songwriter
with the release first two songs of the collection” change to “with the release of the first two songs on the collection”
Encouraged by his work releasing” to “encouraged by his work of releasing”
The music co-written with many other songwriters” add a “was” before co-written
weekly podcast with music journalist Cindy Watts spanning 52 weeks.” you can remove Watts’ name here
and is a collection of music” you can remove the “and”
and consisted of themes about true love” same as the above comment
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
52 (album series) was nominated as a Music good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (May 17, 2024, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
A fact from 52 (album series) appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the
Did you know column on 11 December 2023 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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This article is rated B-class on Wikipedia's
content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||||||
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The result was: promoted by
Bruxton
talk 21:09, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
Created by Panini! ( talk). Self-nominated at 19:10, 19 October 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/52 (album series); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
Hook eligibility:
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px. |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
The article is long enough and old enough. The hooks are interesting. I'm not certain about the image requirements. The one issue that stands out to me is that one quotation in the article isn't cited or listed in the closest ref, which I've noted in-line. Otherwise, this is looking good!
Significa liberdade (
talk) 06:54, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewing |
Nominator: Panini! ( talk · contribs) 18:16, 1 January 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: IanTEB ( talk · contribs) 16:26, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
I think this article is generally well-written but I have some concerns about the abundance of primary interview sources. I’ll give a full review but will request a second opinion, hopefully from an editor with more GA reviews and nominations than me; this is only my second review.
with Andrew Hyra as the duo alternative folk rock band Billy Pilgrim" - I think duo can be removed here
Bush's 50th birthday coincided with the day the United States government mandated lockdowns in response to the COVID-19 pandemic." I would cut this sentence since it doesn’t seem to lead into anything
Bush originally planned to release the songs independently; always anticipating someone would appear to greenlight a project to that scale, he finally accepted that "no one was coming" and he would need to put the idea into motion on his own. He called the CEO of Big Machine Records Scott Borchetta, the label for Sugarland, and explained the idea to him, simply so he was aware of what he was doing.[5] To Bush's surprise Borchetta was intrigued and supported the project.” I recommend cutting this down. Perhaps something like “
Not finding a label for the project, Bush planned to release the series on his own. He contacted Scott Borchetta, the CEO of Sugarland’s label Big Machine Records, and explained the project to keep him updated with his plans. To Bush's surprise, Borchetta was intrigued and supported the project" would be good
He described the podcast as "the liner notes I always wish I had, with the person that I always wished had written them."” For promotional stuff like this I don’t think it’s recommended to keep full quotes; I would remove it entirely
9 of the 10 on the album were co-written” Assuming you mean “
9 of the 10 songs”?
The blend was inspired from a live performance” I think this should specificy blend of country and R&B
energy with a unique blend of country music” Remove “unique” here for NPOV
He noticed that the country music emphasized "the song" and the R&B instrumentation emphasized "the energy".” I would cut this. If it was from a secondary journalist I think comments like this are good, but with primary sourcing it almost feels vague and non-neutral
’Tennessee Plates’ was written in 2016 following the death of his father, Jack Bush” Remove the name of his father since he doesn’t have an article and is not mentioned by name again
encouraged Bush to comfortable discussing death in music” change to “to be comfortable” or “to feel comfortable”
Flynn appreciated the depth of the lyrics and believed they are just as strong without the music” remove this for NPOV, comments like this should ideally only be used from secondary sources
features positive instrumentation and writing” maybe change “positive” to a more neutral adjective like happy or upbeat
"a beach song with a smile on it. When you play even a sad song of Kristian's, it's a sad song with a smile on it."” I would prefer to remove everything after the first sentence of the quote
The lyrics of the song are a reflection of emotions associated with summer” what song is this referring to? or do you mean songs plural?
"Sailing to Arizona"'s lyrics were written to be an anthem of taking chances” Anthem feels a little POV (even if it is attributed), maybe you could change it to something else?
The album focuses on its melodies and themes of true love” “its” can be removed
The title is derived from the lyrics last song on the album,” do you mean “from the lyrics to the last song on the album”?
’New Year's resolution #7’ consists of a list of what he wanted to change about himselfchange first “he” to “Bush”.
singer, songwriter, and record producer” change “singer, songwriter” to singer-songwriter
with the release first two songs of the collection” change to “with the release of the first two songs on the collection”
Encouraged by his work releasing” to “encouraged by his work of releasing”
The music co-written with many other songwriters” add a “was” before co-written
weekly podcast with music journalist Cindy Watts spanning 52 weeks.” you can remove Watts’ name here
and is a collection of music” you can remove the “and”
and consisted of themes about true love” same as the above comment
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria