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Reviewer: MusikAnimal ( talk · contribs) 00:42, 3 November 2014 (UTC)
5+ months is a long wait! I'll be reviewing this good article nomination. The size of this article is moderately large (for me, as a reviewer), so please do allow some time. Hopefully I'll some feedback for you fairly soon, though. —
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00:42, 3 November 2014 (UTC)
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... through Immortal and VirginI'd tag on the word "records" at the end.
Thirty Seconds to Mars contacted Ezrin because ...was attributed to the LaGambia source but it is found word for word in the MuchMusic source. This makes me question the use of other sources.
The track "Fallen" faces the need to escape from the inner world that every person has created for itselfthe latter part of this sentence (italicized) doesn't appear to be in the source, but I could be missing something. The wording sounds like original research, as in an opinionated interpretation of the song.
The lyrics of "Oblivion" ... Leto described this paradox as a rather common but unfortunate occurrenceThe "shoutweb" source says the lyrics are to a song called "The Reckoning". Is that the same song?
The lyrics of "Oblivion", originally entitled "The Reckoning", ...— MusikAnimal talk 17:04, 9 November 2014 (UTC)
Its themes refers to many aspects of life as well as military strategy.Military strategy? Where do you gather that?
... artists such as Pink Floyd, The Cure, Björk, Rush, The Who, and Depeche ModeNot all these are in the source. I don't see The Cure, Björk, Rush, or Depeche Mode. Sorry for being picky, verifiability is important!
The album's compact disc ... footage edited by Ari SandelThis is not sourced. If no third-party sources can be found to verify this, I think the primary source will be alright. You can cite multimedia with {{ cite av media}}.
While there are (were) some very serious issues with this article, I am not going to fail the nomination just yet. I've posted my initial findings, and am interested to hear what you have to say about them. I will continue to further examine the sources and post more feedback later. —
MusikAnimal
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02:14, 3 November 2014 (UTC)
There were some serious fallacies, but I think we've ended up with a pretty good article. Sorry for being so picky. With all issues addressed, I am passing this nomination. Congratulations —
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22:19, 10 November 2014 (UTC)
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Reviewer: MusikAnimal ( talk · contribs) 00:42, 3 November 2014 (UTC)
5+ months is a long wait! I'll be reviewing this good article nomination. The size of this article is moderately large (for me, as a reviewer), so please do allow some time. Hopefully I'll some feedback for you fairly soon, though. —
MusikAnimal
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00:42, 3 November 2014 (UTC)
GA review – see
WP:WIAGA for criteria
... through Immortal and VirginI'd tag on the word "records" at the end.
Thirty Seconds to Mars contacted Ezrin because ...was attributed to the LaGambia source but it is found word for word in the MuchMusic source. This makes me question the use of other sources.
The track "Fallen" faces the need to escape from the inner world that every person has created for itselfthe latter part of this sentence (italicized) doesn't appear to be in the source, but I could be missing something. The wording sounds like original research, as in an opinionated interpretation of the song.
The lyrics of "Oblivion" ... Leto described this paradox as a rather common but unfortunate occurrenceThe "shoutweb" source says the lyrics are to a song called "The Reckoning". Is that the same song?
The lyrics of "Oblivion", originally entitled "The Reckoning", ...— MusikAnimal talk 17:04, 9 November 2014 (UTC)
Its themes refers to many aspects of life as well as military strategy.Military strategy? Where do you gather that?
... artists such as Pink Floyd, The Cure, Björk, Rush, The Who, and Depeche ModeNot all these are in the source. I don't see The Cure, Björk, Rush, or Depeche Mode. Sorry for being picky, verifiability is important!
The album's compact disc ... footage edited by Ari SandelThis is not sourced. If no third-party sources can be found to verify this, I think the primary source will be alright. You can cite multimedia with {{ cite av media}}.
While there are (were) some very serious issues with this article, I am not going to fail the nomination just yet. I've posted my initial findings, and am interested to hear what you have to say about them. I will continue to further examine the sources and post more feedback later. —
MusikAnimal
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02:14, 3 November 2014 (UTC)
There were some serious fallacies, but I think we've ended up with a pretty good article. Sorry for being so picky. With all issues addressed, I am passing this nomination. Congratulations —
MusikAnimal
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22:19, 10 November 2014 (UTC)