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Reviewer: TompaDompa ( talk · contribs) 04:59, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
I will review this. See Template:Did you know nominations/24 Hour Psycho. TompaDompa ( talk) 04:59, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
two side-by-side projections of 24 Hour Psycho—one running forwards and the other backwards—until both films meet in the middle for an identical, one-second shot– I would say this is WP:Close paraphrasing of the source's "two side-by-side projections of 24 Hour Psycho, with one running forward and one running backward, until both films meet in the middle for an identical, one-second shot", but it's more like an unattributed quote. This recurs in the body.
causing reflection on both sides of the screen so that it may be viewed from either sideis not quite the right way to put this. The source's "reflection" is in the figurative sense of "contemplation" or "meditation". Simply removing "causing reflection on both sides of the screen" would solve this.
This, which Gordon calls an "act of curiosity", inspired him to create 24 Hour Psycho.– I'm guessing you misheard due to Gordon's Scottish accent. He says "active curiosity" (because, as he says, "idle curiosity" is a contradiction in terms).
Brown also claimed that as a substantial part of Douglas' work, 24 Hour Psycho has been "shown all over the world"– I would parse this use of "as" as "it has been shown all over the world, as has a significant proportion of Douglas' other creations", but what the source says is "The renown of 24 Hour Psycho has made it a substantial part of Douglas's biography [...]", in other words saying that it is "a substantial part" rather than has similarities with a substantial part.
In 2010, Gordon created a second installation entitled 24 Hour Psycho Back and Forth and To and Fro– this source says 2008.
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Ping LunaEatsTuna. TompaDompa ( talk) 19:14, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
two identical screens installed side by side, with Douglas's film playing in full on each: forward on one, backward on the other, with one flipped left to right such that—at exactly twelve hours in—they present the same images, mirrored, in a kind of exquisite, time-limited film version of a Rorschach inkblot test.TompaDompa ( talk) 08:50, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: TompaDompa ( talk · contribs) 04:59, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
I will review this. See Template:Did you know nominations/24 Hour Psycho. TompaDompa ( talk) 04:59, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
two side-by-side projections of 24 Hour Psycho—one running forwards and the other backwards—until both films meet in the middle for an identical, one-second shot– I would say this is WP:Close paraphrasing of the source's "two side-by-side projections of 24 Hour Psycho, with one running forward and one running backward, until both films meet in the middle for an identical, one-second shot", but it's more like an unattributed quote. This recurs in the body.
causing reflection on both sides of the screen so that it may be viewed from either sideis not quite the right way to put this. The source's "reflection" is in the figurative sense of "contemplation" or "meditation". Simply removing "causing reflection on both sides of the screen" would solve this.
This, which Gordon calls an "act of curiosity", inspired him to create 24 Hour Psycho.– I'm guessing you misheard due to Gordon's Scottish accent. He says "active curiosity" (because, as he says, "idle curiosity" is a contradiction in terms).
Brown also claimed that as a substantial part of Douglas' work, 24 Hour Psycho has been "shown all over the world"– I would parse this use of "as" as "it has been shown all over the world, as has a significant proportion of Douglas' other creations", but what the source says is "The renown of 24 Hour Psycho has made it a substantial part of Douglas's biography [...]", in other words saying that it is "a substantial part" rather than has similarities with a substantial part.
In 2010, Gordon created a second installation entitled 24 Hour Psycho Back and Forth and To and Fro– this source says 2008.
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Ping LunaEatsTuna. TompaDompa ( talk) 19:14, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
two identical screens installed side by side, with Douglas's film playing in full on each: forward on one, backward on the other, with one flipped left to right such that—at exactly twelve hours in—they present the same images, mirrored, in a kind of exquisite, time-limited film version of a Rorschach inkblot test.TompaDompa ( talk) 08:50, 7 June 2023 (UTC)