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Reviewer: SpaceEconomist192 ( talk · contribs) 17:24, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
A good article is—
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(a) (prose) | Per
MOS:INTRO, the lead section should be accessible to a broad audience. The 2nd paragraph has way too much football terminology, I couldn't understand whole sentences. If possible, try to substitute jargon like punt, drive, fumble, safety and turnover to layman's terms.
This sentence is confusing,
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(b) (MoS) | ...representing Conference USA (C–USA), began. The wikilink from «Conference USA» is repeated, remove it.
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MOS:LEADCITE, inline citations in the lead section should be avoided if possible. The two inline citations in |
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(a) (references) |
Checked references #1, #2, #3, #4, #12, #15, #22, #39 and #41 of this version. Isn't there an official ESPN source for the referee instead of the #3 source (Football Zebras)? The #4 source (College Football Poll) doesn't seem reliable for that kind of information. The #12 source (KSAT) doesn't state that it was UTSA first win. |
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(b) (citations to reliable sources) | The game was played at Exploria Stadium in Orlando, Florida, and weather at kickoff was sunny with a temperature of 66 °F (19 °C).This needs an inline citation.
The attendance number stated in the infobox needs a source. |
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(c) (original research) | After the Roadrunners gained only one total yard on their next three plays, they were forced to attempt another fourth down conversion, and this one was also unsuccessful.. This might be original research but I know nothing about this sport. Is the team obliged to do a fourth down conversion or do they have more options of possible plays? |
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(d) (copyvio and plagiarism) | Earwig's Copyvio Detector says violation unlikely (5,7%). |
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(a) (major aspects) | ...the game usually features teams from the Mid-American Conference and the Sun Belt Conference; however, this season's matchup featured a team from Conference USA.Why was a team from Conference USA picked instead of one from Mid-American Conference? An explanation should be in the article.
A post-match section should be included in the article. Don't forget to update the lead afterwards. |
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(b) (focused) | ...in a game visited by College GameDay. Why is the fact that College GameDay broadcasted that specific game relevant to the article? If it isn't, I advise its removal.
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...began their season with a thrilling triple-overtime..., «thrilling» is a peacock term, it needs to be removed.
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Reviewer: SpaceEconomist192 ( talk · contribs) 17:24, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
A good article is—
Criteria | Notes | Result |
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(a) (prose) | Per
MOS:INTRO, the lead section should be accessible to a broad audience. The 2nd paragraph has way too much football terminology, I couldn't understand whole sentences. If possible, try to substitute jargon like punt, drive, fumble, safety and turnover to layman's terms.
This sentence is confusing,
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(b) (MoS) | ...representing Conference USA (C–USA), began. The wikilink from «Conference USA» is repeated, remove it.
Per
MOS:LEADCITE, inline citations in the lead section should be avoided if possible. The two inline citations in |
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Criteria | Notes | Result |
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(a) (references) |
Checked references #1, #2, #3, #4, #12, #15, #22, #39 and #41 of this version. Isn't there an official ESPN source for the referee instead of the #3 source (Football Zebras)? The #4 source (College Football Poll) doesn't seem reliable for that kind of information. The #12 source (KSAT) doesn't state that it was UTSA first win. |
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(b) (citations to reliable sources) | The game was played at Exploria Stadium in Orlando, Florida, and weather at kickoff was sunny with a temperature of 66 °F (19 °C).This needs an inline citation.
The attendance number stated in the infobox needs a source. |
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(c) (original research) | After the Roadrunners gained only one total yard on their next three plays, they were forced to attempt another fourth down conversion, and this one was also unsuccessful.. This might be original research but I know nothing about this sport. Is the team obliged to do a fourth down conversion or do they have more options of possible plays? |
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(d) (copyvio and plagiarism) | Earwig's Copyvio Detector says violation unlikely (5,7%). |
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(a) (major aspects) | ...the game usually features teams from the Mid-American Conference and the Sun Belt Conference; however, this season's matchup featured a team from Conference USA.Why was a team from Conference USA picked instead of one from Mid-American Conference? An explanation should be in the article.
A post-match section should be included in the article. Don't forget to update the lead afterwards. |
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(b) (focused) | ...in a game visited by College GameDay. Why is the fact that College GameDay broadcasted that specific game relevant to the article? If it isn't, I advise its removal.
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...began their season with a thrilling triple-overtime..., «thrilling» is a peacock term, it needs to be removed.
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Everything peaceful |
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