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Reviewer: MWright96 ( talk · contribs) 08:03, 8 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Taking this review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 08:03, 8 October 2020 (UTC) reply

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a ( reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c ( OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a ( major aspects): b ( focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b ( appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• How about wikilinking extra time, free kick and substitute to the relevant articles?

Route to the final

• "Championship top scorer Aleksandar Mitrović was unavailable for Fulham through injury." - what type of injury?
• The term half time should be wikilinked
• Wikilink aggregate to the relevant article on the first mention
• The first mention of Swansea City is not wikilinked
• "gave the home team a 1–0 which they held on to until the final whistle." - a 1–0 lead
• "and was the last match to be hosted at the stadium before Brentford's move to a new stadium." - the name of the new stadium pleas

Background

• "they lost the 1997 Football League Second Division play-off Final 1–0 against Crewe Alexandra, the 2002 Football League Second Division play-off Final 2–0 against Stoke City, and the 2013 Football League One play-off Final 2–1 against Yeovil Town." - perphaps reduce the number of times the word "against" is used in this sentence
• Perhaps state who broadcast the match and who was considered the favourites to win if the information is available?

First half

• Wikilink penalty area
• Wikilink corner to the relevant article
• "caught a Fulham cross three minutes later," - which Fulham player caught the cross?

  It already says who caught it. The Rambling Man ( Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 10:04, 8 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Second half

• "Benrahma made a run into the penalty area and his cross was blocked" - blocked by whom?

  Not mentioned. The Rambling Man ( Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 10:05, 8 October 2020 (UTC) reply

• Wikilink set piece to Set piece (football)
• "Onomah then struck a shot over the Brentford's bar" - the text indiciated in bold is a typo

Extra time

• "On four mimnutes," - typo
• "while Fulham's Ivan Cavaleiro was brought on by Fulham in place of Kamara." - repetition of "Fulham"
• "In the 116th minute of the match," - the source and the details section say it was the 117th minute
• Wikilink time-wasting to Running out the clock

Notes

• The note should be referenced to a reliable source

References

• Reference 15 is missing the publisher

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 09:32, 8 October 2020 (UTC) reply

MWright96 all done bar those I've commented against above. Cheers, thanks very much for your review. The Rambling Man ( Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 10:22, 8 October 2020 (UTC) reply

@ The Rambling Man: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 10:56, 8 October 2020 (UTC) reply