The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Vacant0 ( talk · contribs) 22:06, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
Hello again Impru, I'll be reviewing this GAN as part of the
ongoing GAN backlog drive. Please note that this review will take several days. --
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peripheral nationalistscould possible reworded. See the broadness section below.
with the PSOE secured three→ with the PSOE securing three
failed→ fail
with the only support of the PRC→ only gaining support from the PRC
recent protests in Cataloniaconsidering that it is listed as a WTW.
Spotchecking will be done on 17 August. -- Vacant0 ( talk) 14:02, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
Possibly add wikilinks for "regional" and "nationalist" parties if there are any.Links to the proper regional or nationalist parties are added when due (with some care at following MOS:REPEATLINK and attempting to avoid WP:OVERLINK). Not sure if you mean something more precise though (there is no article on "regional and nationalist parties in Spain" generally; at the most, there is one on National and regional identity in Spain, but I'm not sure if that one is suited for linking here).
Lede should be expanded to give a broader overview of the article.The lede is already broad, isn't it? It follows the scheme of 2015–2016 Spanish government formation (already reviewed and elevated to GA status). Nonetheless, specify what do you miss from there and I can add it without any issue.
Add original Spanish text of the quotes in the article that have been translated into English immediately after the quotes in parenthesis, per MOS:FOREIGNQUOTE.Not sure how to implement this without looking messy (especially because many quotes have been arranged to blend with the text and look natural rather than quoting the full sentence shown in the source, such as using specific words and such).
There are 8 primary sources. Find replacements if possible.Did you take note of which ones? Finding these amid 167 references may be difficult.
Ref 2 and 3 do not mention Izquierda Unida, ECP, and Equo. It is possible that they are mentioned in Ref 2 considering that the rest of the article is subscription-locked. If this is the case, please provide direct quotes here below, and if not, add sources that mention these three parties.They don't because the refs already mention Unidas Podemos, of which IU, ECP and Equo were member parties (which is sourced in the main alliance article and in April 2019 Spanish general election). That specific mention you note is a clarification to readers of the main components within the alliance (it's literally said like that: "Unidas Podemos—the electoral alliance of Pablo Iglesias's Podemos, United Left (IU), En Comú Podem, Equo and other minor left-wing parties"), as well as a reminder that Unidas Podemos =/= Podemos in particular. This would fall under WP:BLUESKY.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Vacant0 ( talk · contribs) 22:06, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
Hello again Impru, I'll be reviewing this GAN as part of the
ongoing GAN backlog drive. Please note that this review will take several days. --
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22:06, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
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peripheral nationalistscould possible reworded. See the broadness section below.
with the PSOE secured three→ with the PSOE securing three
failed→ fail
with the only support of the PRC→ only gaining support from the PRC
recent protests in Cataloniaconsidering that it is listed as a WTW.
Spotchecking will be done on 17 August. -- Vacant0 ( talk) 14:02, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
Possibly add wikilinks for "regional" and "nationalist" parties if there are any.Links to the proper regional or nationalist parties are added when due (with some care at following MOS:REPEATLINK and attempting to avoid WP:OVERLINK). Not sure if you mean something more precise though (there is no article on "regional and nationalist parties in Spain" generally; at the most, there is one on National and regional identity in Spain, but I'm not sure if that one is suited for linking here).
Lede should be expanded to give a broader overview of the article.The lede is already broad, isn't it? It follows the scheme of 2015–2016 Spanish government formation (already reviewed and elevated to GA status). Nonetheless, specify what do you miss from there and I can add it without any issue.
Add original Spanish text of the quotes in the article that have been translated into English immediately after the quotes in parenthesis, per MOS:FOREIGNQUOTE.Not sure how to implement this without looking messy (especially because many quotes have been arranged to blend with the text and look natural rather than quoting the full sentence shown in the source, such as using specific words and such).
There are 8 primary sources. Find replacements if possible.Did you take note of which ones? Finding these amid 167 references may be difficult.
Ref 2 and 3 do not mention Izquierda Unida, ECP, and Equo. It is possible that they are mentioned in Ref 2 considering that the rest of the article is subscription-locked. If this is the case, please provide direct quotes here below, and if not, add sources that mention these three parties.They don't because the refs already mention Unidas Podemos, of which IU, ECP and Equo were member parties (which is sourced in the main alliance article and in April 2019 Spanish general election). That specific mention you note is a clarification to readers of the main components within the alliance (it's literally said like that: "Unidas Podemos—the electoral alliance of Pablo Iglesias's Podemos, United Left (IU), En Comú Podem, Equo and other minor left-wing parties"), as well as a reminder that Unidas Podemos =/= Podemos in particular. This would fall under WP:BLUESKY.