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Israel aid was the only mentioned so far, but the UAE (and possibly other countries) have also dedicated funds for Sierra Leone's relief, but have channeled it through the World Food Program. Channeling relief through international bodies should not exclude the country from being mentioned for its contribution, so long as it has indeed dedicated funds. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simpatico qa ( talk • contribs) 11:45, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
We collect all that is known and relevant to the subject, without subjective selection of which facts we deem suitable to list and which omit. We strive not to omit true and verifiable information. Listing only the country that didn't channel it's support via an established framework of international collaboration unfairly singles out that countries as a donor from its neighbors that may have provided more aid, but through coordinated international relief. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simpatico qa ( talk • contribs) 19:47, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
Singling out Israel in your mention, in which you cited local media, you are giving it undue weight. Other countries have contributed more in aid, and their aid reached first through international collaboration framework. Simpatico qa ( talk) 06:04, 18 August 2017 (UTC)
WP:JUSTDONTLIKEIT and WP:UNDUE could also be said of the narrative that you have imposed. To be balanced, the page should either be more inclusive, or single out no country.
No offense intended. Indeed thank you for listing the relief (and pledges of relief) from all of China, Ireland, United Kingdom, Guinea, Nigeria, and Liberia. It reads much more balanced and inclusive now. I hope you will also list Turkey's and the UAE's< [1]. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simpatico qa ( talk • contribs) 08:49, 18 August 2017 (UTC)
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Hi, first of all thanks for all the work you put into this article. I enjoyed reading it.
If there's anything I can do to help you find a copyeditor, feel free to ask.-- Carabinieri ( talk) 01:23, 1 June 2018 (UTC)
Hi @ Spintendo:, thanks for taking this on. It's a real shame what happened with Graceful. I understand that sockpuppetry is a problem, but to throw out productive editors left and right the way we do nowadays is hardly helpful. Anyway, sorry for getting off-track. I think the way you re-organized parts of the article is helpful, but there are a few issues:
The peninsula where Freetown is located has a topography of "thick, wooded mountains which run parallel to the Atlantic for 25 miles." [2] Located in and around this variegated topography, Freetown's elevation with regards to the Atlantic Ocean varies from coastal areas which are at sea level to approximately 350 meters above sea level in higher-ground areas.As far as the map, it can be difficult to activate, let me see if I can't find a better source. spintendo 01:10, 22 August 2018 (UTC)
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Thanks for your patience. I've done a little more copyediting and re-organizing. Could you check that I didn't mess up anything? Otherwise, I think this looks good to go. Thanks again for stepping in.-- Carabinieri ( talk) 10:15, 25 August 2018 (UTC)
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2017 Sierra Leone mudslides has been listed as one of the
Natural sciences good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: August 27, 2018. ( Reviewed version). |
A news item involving 2017 Sierra Leone mudslides was featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the In the news section on 15 August 2017. |
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Israel aid was the only mentioned so far, but the UAE (and possibly other countries) have also dedicated funds for Sierra Leone's relief, but have channeled it through the World Food Program. Channeling relief through international bodies should not exclude the country from being mentioned for its contribution, so long as it has indeed dedicated funds. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simpatico qa ( talk • contribs) 11:45, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
We collect all that is known and relevant to the subject, without subjective selection of which facts we deem suitable to list and which omit. We strive not to omit true and verifiable information. Listing only the country that didn't channel it's support via an established framework of international collaboration unfairly singles out that countries as a donor from its neighbors that may have provided more aid, but through coordinated international relief. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simpatico qa ( talk • contribs) 19:47, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
Singling out Israel in your mention, in which you cited local media, you are giving it undue weight. Other countries have contributed more in aid, and their aid reached first through international collaboration framework. Simpatico qa ( talk) 06:04, 18 August 2017 (UTC)
WP:JUSTDONTLIKEIT and WP:UNDUE could also be said of the narrative that you have imposed. To be balanced, the page should either be more inclusive, or single out no country.
No offense intended. Indeed thank you for listing the relief (and pledges of relief) from all of China, Ireland, United Kingdom, Guinea, Nigeria, and Liberia. It reads much more balanced and inclusive now. I hope you will also list Turkey's and the UAE's< [1]. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Simpatico qa ( talk • contribs) 08:49, 18 August 2017 (UTC)
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Hi, first of all thanks for all the work you put into this article. I enjoyed reading it.
If there's anything I can do to help you find a copyeditor, feel free to ask.-- Carabinieri ( talk) 01:23, 1 June 2018 (UTC)
Hi @ Spintendo:, thanks for taking this on. It's a real shame what happened with Graceful. I understand that sockpuppetry is a problem, but to throw out productive editors left and right the way we do nowadays is hardly helpful. Anyway, sorry for getting off-track. I think the way you re-organized parts of the article is helpful, but there are a few issues:
The peninsula where Freetown is located has a topography of "thick, wooded mountains which run parallel to the Atlantic for 25 miles." [2] Located in and around this variegated topography, Freetown's elevation with regards to the Atlantic Ocean varies from coastal areas which are at sea level to approximately 350 meters above sea level in higher-ground areas.As far as the map, it can be difficult to activate, let me see if I can't find a better source. spintendo 01:10, 22 August 2018 (UTC)
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: CS1 maint: location (
link) CS1 maint: location missing publisher (
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Thanks for your patience. I've done a little more copyediting and re-organizing. Could you check that I didn't mess up anything? Otherwise, I think this looks good to go. Thanks again for stepping in.-- Carabinieri ( talk) 10:15, 25 August 2018 (UTC)
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