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"The 2015 RochelleāFairdale, Illinois tornado was an extremely violent and long-lived twister that tore through the communities near Rochelle and in Fairdale, Illinois in the evening hours of April 9, 2015. " you use "in" twice in one setynece and why the year in the date given it's a title.
YEPacificHurricane16:53, 28 April 2017 (UTC)reply
"On April 4, the Storm Prediction Center (SPC) issued their Day 6 severe weather outlook, highlighting a substantial and widespread risk for severe weather from southeastern Oklahoma to northeastern Illinois valid for April 9.[1] " link to
Storm Prediction Center.
YEPacificHurricane16:53, 28 April 2017 (UTC)reply
Modest surface heating ahead of the cold front allowed mid-level CAPE values to reach 1,000ā1,500 J/kg, and a mass of rich moisture transported northward from the Gulf of Mexico pushed dewpoints into the lower 60s Ā°F across the Enhanced risk area.[6] " explain/link CAPE and convert units (J/kg) and (F).
YEPacificHurricane16:53, 28 April 2017 (UTC)reply
"Isolated shower activity had already begun forming across the region just prior to the issuance of watch,[8] eventually growing into a line of strong to severe thunderstorms, including supercells.[9]" link/explain supercells and change "had already begun forming" to "starting to develop".
YEPacificHurricane16:53, 28 April 2017 (UTC)reply
" A well-constructed barn was completely obliterated, and a 40 ft (13 yd) reinforced concrete silo was reduced to a pile of rubble" convert to meters not yards.
YEPacificHurricane16:53, 28 April 2017 (UTC)reply
" A 67-year-old woman and her 69-year-old neighbor both were killed in their homes, and an additional 11 people were injured throughout the town." don't think you need both.
YEPacificHurricane16:53, 28 April 2017 (UTC)reply
"Near the intersection of Irene Road and McNeal Road, a well-built 7-year-old-house lost its second story and many exterior walls. " spell out seven
YEPacificHurricane16:53, 28 April 2017 (UTC)reply
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"The 2015 RochelleāFairdale, Illinois tornado was an extremely violent and long-lived twister that tore through the communities near Rochelle and in Fairdale, Illinois in the evening hours of April 9, 2015. " you use "in" twice in one setynece and why the year in the date given it's a title.
YEPacificHurricane16:53, 28 April 2017 (UTC)reply
"On April 4, the Storm Prediction Center (SPC) issued their Day 6 severe weather outlook, highlighting a substantial and widespread risk for severe weather from southeastern Oklahoma to northeastern Illinois valid for April 9.[1] " link to
Storm Prediction Center.
YEPacificHurricane16:53, 28 April 2017 (UTC)reply
Modest surface heating ahead of the cold front allowed mid-level CAPE values to reach 1,000ā1,500 J/kg, and a mass of rich moisture transported northward from the Gulf of Mexico pushed dewpoints into the lower 60s Ā°F across the Enhanced risk area.[6] " explain/link CAPE and convert units (J/kg) and (F).
YEPacificHurricane16:53, 28 April 2017 (UTC)reply
"Isolated shower activity had already begun forming across the region just prior to the issuance of watch,[8] eventually growing into a line of strong to severe thunderstorms, including supercells.[9]" link/explain supercells and change "had already begun forming" to "starting to develop".
YEPacificHurricane16:53, 28 April 2017 (UTC)reply
" A well-constructed barn was completely obliterated, and a 40 ft (13 yd) reinforced concrete silo was reduced to a pile of rubble" convert to meters not yards.
YEPacificHurricane16:53, 28 April 2017 (UTC)reply
" A 67-year-old woman and her 69-year-old neighbor both were killed in their homes, and an additional 11 people were injured throughout the town." don't think you need both.
YEPacificHurricane16:53, 28 April 2017 (UTC)reply
"Near the intersection of Irene Road and McNeal Road, a well-built 7-year-old-house lost its second story and many exterior walls. " spell out seven
YEPacificHurricane16:53, 28 April 2017 (UTC)reply