Froztbyte: sorry to be a pain, but are you still working on this review? I know sometimes other priorities come up, and if you are busy with other things we could find a different reviewer?
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16:59, 10 April 2016 (UTC)reply
“a late penalty, which Messi shot into Atlético goalkeeper Jan Oblak”
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“Barcelona had more chances after this, with Herrerín making saves from Neymar, who in the 36th minute scored the second goal of the game.” this appears to give more weight to the saves than the goal
Post-match mentions the booing of the anthem, but this happened in (before) the match itself, so why is it not mentioned there?
In most cases such an action by a crowd would be ephermeral. In this case it goes in the post-match because that was when both teams the RFEF were laden with fines.
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22:16, 21 April 2016 (UTC)reply
Just been checking for copyvios, there is an interesting page at
[1] which is very similar, but I am sure this is a copy of an earlier version. There is a note at the bottom of that page: All the logos, contents, trademarks, images etc on this website are not our intellectual property. All the content displayed on this website is the copyright of their respected owners., although there is no attribution to Wikipedia. No dead links. Reference check to follow. C67918:24, 28 April 2016 (UTC)reply
There is some inconsistency regarding singular/plural verb forms after the team names. It is my understanding that common custom is to consistently use plural, Barcelona were and not was. Can you check it? C67918:30, 28 April 2016 (UTC)reply
Last 16, Last 32 still outstanding. Also I note the first yellow card is mentioned in the prose but not the rest. Was Neymar's somehow related to his showboating? Also what about "equalised the aggregate", that doesn't seem to make sense. C67921:14, 29 April 2016 (UTC)reply
neither of fn1 and fn2 seem to support it being Barcelona’s 27th title
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Still not referenced, and since that statistic don't appear in the body of the article, it shouldn't be in the lead. C67918:43, 11 June 2016 (UTC)reply
Cloudz679 see here. There is a list of wins and finals appearances. Although it has been updated to 2016, the reader can easily count backwards with the information provided
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13:38, 23 June 2016 (UTC)reply
“However, two days before the intended suspension, this action was deemed unlawful by a court, and the season continued.[10]” which court? add from the ref.
Not all done. As I wrote in my last comment here "statistic[s that] don't appear in the body of the article ... shouldn't be in the lead". C67923:57, 1 July 2016 (UTC)reply
Cloudz679 Yes it is, from ref4. As I have said, there is a list of wins and final appearances. Although it has been updated since, it is possible to count backwards very easily to 2015
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07:21, 2 July 2016 (UTC)reply
The information is in the lead but not in the body of the article. Not a referencing issue. Please address. C67919:56, 4 July 2016 (UTC)reply
"However, Barcelona had won the competition a record 26 times.[4]" I don't think we need to write again that winning makes that go up to 27.
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20:02, 4 July 2016 (UTC)reply
Froztbyte: sorry to be a pain, but are you still working on this review? I know sometimes other priorities come up, and if you are busy with other things we could find a different reviewer?
'''tAD''' (
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16:59, 10 April 2016 (UTC)reply
“a late penalty, which Messi shot into Atlético goalkeeper Jan Oblak”
brace
“Barcelona had more chances after this, with Herrerín making saves from Neymar, who in the 36th minute scored the second goal of the game.” this appears to give more weight to the saves than the goal
Post-match mentions the booing of the anthem, but this happened in (before) the match itself, so why is it not mentioned there?
In most cases such an action by a crowd would be ephermeral. In this case it goes in the post-match because that was when both teams the RFEF were laden with fines.
'''tAD''' (
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22:16, 21 April 2016 (UTC)reply
Just been checking for copyvios, there is an interesting page at
[1] which is very similar, but I am sure this is a copy of an earlier version. There is a note at the bottom of that page: All the logos, contents, trademarks, images etc on this website are not our intellectual property. All the content displayed on this website is the copyright of their respected owners., although there is no attribution to Wikipedia. No dead links. Reference check to follow. C67918:24, 28 April 2016 (UTC)reply
There is some inconsistency regarding singular/plural verb forms after the team names. It is my understanding that common custom is to consistently use plural, Barcelona were and not was. Can you check it? C67918:30, 28 April 2016 (UTC)reply
Last 16, Last 32 still outstanding. Also I note the first yellow card is mentioned in the prose but not the rest. Was Neymar's somehow related to his showboating? Also what about "equalised the aggregate", that doesn't seem to make sense. C67921:14, 29 April 2016 (UTC)reply
neither of fn1 and fn2 seem to support it being Barcelona’s 27th title
Removed
Still not referenced, and since that statistic don't appear in the body of the article, it shouldn't be in the lead. C67918:43, 11 June 2016 (UTC)reply
Cloudz679 see here. There is a list of wins and finals appearances. Although it has been updated to 2016, the reader can easily count backwards with the information provided
'''tAD''' (
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13:38, 23 June 2016 (UTC)reply
“However, two days before the intended suspension, this action was deemed unlawful by a court, and the season continued.[10]” which court? add from the ref.
Not all done. As I wrote in my last comment here "statistic[s that] don't appear in the body of the article ... shouldn't be in the lead". C67923:57, 1 July 2016 (UTC)reply
Cloudz679 Yes it is, from ref4. As I have said, there is a list of wins and final appearances. Although it has been updated since, it is possible to count backwards very easily to 2015
'''tAD''' (
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07:21, 2 July 2016 (UTC)reply
The information is in the lead but not in the body of the article. Not a referencing issue. Please address. C67919:56, 4 July 2016 (UTC)reply
"However, Barcelona had won the competition a record 26 times.[4]" I don't think we need to write again that winning makes that go up to 27.
'''tAD''' (
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20:02, 4 July 2016 (UTC)reply