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Reviewer: Vacant0 ( talk · contribs) 20:16, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
Hi! I saw this article on the GAN backlog. I will start the review asap. Cheers, -- Vacant0 ( talk) 20:16, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
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Last effort and deadline" section, sources should be removed from the lede per MOS:CITELEAD and kept in the section already stated, while the source for the end of the political deadlock can be moved down to the "
Third investiture attempt" section, more precisely next to the "
On 29 October, Mariano Rajoy succeeded in his investiture attempt with the support of 170 MPs to 111 against and 68 abstentions, thus ending the 10-month political deadlock." sentence. Rest of the lede is alright, it satisfies the manual of style.
All three PP, Podemos and C's took advantage of the growing rebellion within the PSOE to force Sánchez into the negotiating table.→ In order to force Sánchez into the negotiating table, PP, Podemos, and C's took advantage of the growing rebellion within the PSOE.
New round of negotiations",
iirelevance→ irrelevance. Typo.
@ Impru20: Overall, the article is well-written, and even though I did find a couple of mistakes here and there that I've already stated above, it meets most of the GA criteria. I will put the article on hold until these mistakes get fixed. Cheers, -- Vacant0 ( talk) 22:58, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Vacant0 ( talk · contribs) 20:16, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
Hi! I saw this article on the GAN backlog. I will start the review asap. Cheers, -- Vacant0 ( talk) 20:16, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
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Last effort and deadline" section, sources should be removed from the lede per MOS:CITELEAD and kept in the section already stated, while the source for the end of the political deadlock can be moved down to the "
Third investiture attempt" section, more precisely next to the "
On 29 October, Mariano Rajoy succeeded in his investiture attempt with the support of 170 MPs to 111 against and 68 abstentions, thus ending the 10-month political deadlock." sentence. Rest of the lede is alright, it satisfies the manual of style.
All three PP, Podemos and C's took advantage of the growing rebellion within the PSOE to force Sánchez into the negotiating table.→ In order to force Sánchez into the negotiating table, PP, Podemos, and C's took advantage of the growing rebellion within the PSOE.
New round of negotiations",
iirelevance→ irrelevance. Typo.
@ Impru20: Overall, the article is well-written, and even though I did find a couple of mistakes here and there that I've already stated above, it meets most of the GA criteria. I will put the article on hold until these mistakes get fixed. Cheers, -- Vacant0 ( talk) 22:58, 1 January 2022 (UTC)