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Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk · contribs) 16:58, 1 January 2015 (UTC)
Hi, I'll take this one. Will leave some initial comments very soon. ☯
Jag
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16:58, 1 January 2015 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
There are a lot of major concerns here that currently prevent this from becoming GA, most notably the lead section. I'll put this one on hold for the standard seven days but let me know if you need more time, as this article needs some work before it can meet the GA criteria. ☯ Jag uar ☯ 17:11, 1 January 2015 (UTC)
I am sorry to do this, but after being told and looking back on the article, there is a bit more work to be done and now it is missing a lot of valuable prose (especially the lead section). Please don't think of this as a fail though, if you would like to renominate you could ask me and I'll review it straight away again, this time it would be quicker whenever you are ready as everything should be addressed. Good luck ☯ Jag uar ☯ 18:32, 11 January 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk · contribs) 16:58, 1 January 2015 (UTC)
Hi, I'll take this one. Will leave some initial comments very soon. ☯
Jag
uar ☯
16:58, 1 January 2015 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
There are a lot of major concerns here that currently prevent this from becoming GA, most notably the lead section. I'll put this one on hold for the standard seven days but let me know if you need more time, as this article needs some work before it can meet the GA criteria. ☯ Jag uar ☯ 17:11, 1 January 2015 (UTC)
I am sorry to do this, but after being told and looking back on the article, there is a bit more work to be done and now it is missing a lot of valuable prose (especially the lead section). Please don't think of this as a fail though, if you would like to renominate you could ask me and I'll review it straight away again, this time it would be quicker whenever you are ready as everything should be addressed. Good luck ☯ Jag uar ☯ 18:32, 11 January 2015 (UTC)