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Reviewer: Buggie111 ( talk · contribs) 18:30, 1 January 2013 (UTC) Nice to see either the Sun Devils or Wildcats do something good every once in a while... reply

  • Firstly, I see that Refs 12 and 13 are the same (cite the same website). You fix this by using <ref name=rivals>Reference goes here...</ref> for the first instance and <ref name=rivals/> afterwards.
  • comma after first instance of "wildcats"
    •  Done
  • there only seems to be one ref in the lead. I think the MO here is ref all of it or none, but not 33% of it.
  • Second lead para might need some numbers for total offense, not just rushing yards.
    • plus Added total offense
  • "In the fourth quarter, Arizona was able to cut the lead to 45-35 on a 63-yard touchdown pass from Scott to Austin Hill. " could be "Arizona was able to cut the lead to 45-35 on a 63-yard touchdown pass from Scott to Austin Hill soon after the 4th quarter started. "
  • Don't know about whether or not to keep the stats table. 2011 Orange Bowl seems to list the stats in a more comfortable format.

All for now. Two weeks, good luck. Buggie111 ( talk) 18:30, 1 January 2013 (UTC) reply

Pass. Buggie111 ( talk) 00:39, 3 January 2013 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Buggie111 ( talk · contribs) 18:30, 1 January 2013 (UTC) Nice to see either the Sun Devils or Wildcats do something good every once in a while... reply

  • Firstly, I see that Refs 12 and 13 are the same (cite the same website). You fix this by using <ref name=rivals>Reference goes here...</ref> for the first instance and <ref name=rivals/> afterwards.
  • comma after first instance of "wildcats"
    •  Done
  • there only seems to be one ref in the lead. I think the MO here is ref all of it or none, but not 33% of it.
  • Second lead para might need some numbers for total offense, not just rushing yards.
    • plus Added total offense
  • "In the fourth quarter, Arizona was able to cut the lead to 45-35 on a 63-yard touchdown pass from Scott to Austin Hill. " could be "Arizona was able to cut the lead to 45-35 on a 63-yard touchdown pass from Scott to Austin Hill soon after the 4th quarter started. "
  • Don't know about whether or not to keep the stats table. 2011 Orange Bowl seems to list the stats in a more comfortable format.

All for now. Two weeks, good luck. Buggie111 ( talk) 18:30, 1 January 2013 (UTC) reply

Pass. Buggie111 ( talk) 00:39, 3 January 2013 (UTC) reply


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