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Good article2012 New Mexico Bowl has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
January 3, 2013 Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:2012 New Mexico Bowl/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Buggie111 ( talk · contribs) 18:30, 1 January 2013 (UTC) Nice to see either the Sun Devils or Wildcats do something good every once in a while... reply

  • Firstly, I see that Refs 12 and 13 are the same (cite the same website). You fix this by using <ref name=rivals>Reference goes here...</ref> for the first instance and <ref name=rivals/> afterwards.
  • comma after first instance of "wildcats"
    •  Done
  • there only seems to be one ref in the lead. I think the MO here is ref all of it or none, but not 33% of it.
  • Second lead para might need some numbers for total offense, not just rushing yards.
    • plus Added total offense
  • "In the fourth quarter, Arizona was able to cut the lead to 45-35 on a 63-yard touchdown pass from Scott to Austin Hill. " could be "Arizona was able to cut the lead to 45-35 on a 63-yard touchdown pass from Scott to Austin Hill soon after the 4th quarter started. "
  • Don't know about whether or not to keep the stats table. 2011 Orange Bowl seems to list the stats in a more comfortable format.

All for now. Two weeks, good luck. Buggie111 ( talk) 18:30, 1 January 2013 (UTC) reply

Pass. Buggie111 ( talk) 00:39, 3 January 2013 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Good article2012 New Mexico Bowl has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
January 3, 2013 Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:2012 New Mexico Bowl/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Buggie111 ( talk · contribs) 18:30, 1 January 2013 (UTC) Nice to see either the Sun Devils or Wildcats do something good every once in a while... reply

  • Firstly, I see that Refs 12 and 13 are the same (cite the same website). You fix this by using <ref name=rivals>Reference goes here...</ref> for the first instance and <ref name=rivals/> afterwards.
  • comma after first instance of "wildcats"
    •  Done
  • there only seems to be one ref in the lead. I think the MO here is ref all of it or none, but not 33% of it.
  • Second lead para might need some numbers for total offense, not just rushing yards.
    • plus Added total offense
  • "In the fourth quarter, Arizona was able to cut the lead to 45-35 on a 63-yard touchdown pass from Scott to Austin Hill. " could be "Arizona was able to cut the lead to 45-35 on a 63-yard touchdown pass from Scott to Austin Hill soon after the 4th quarter started. "
  • Don't know about whether or not to keep the stats table. 2011 Orange Bowl seems to list the stats in a more comfortable format.

All for now. Two weeks, good luck. Buggie111 ( talk) 18:30, 1 January 2013 (UTC) reply

Pass. Buggie111 ( talk) 00:39, 3 January 2013 (UTC) reply


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