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Reviewer: MWright96 ( talk · contribs) 15:19, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this article as well. It will be reviewed as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 15:19, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (
reference section):
b (citations to
reliable sources): c (
OR):
- a (
reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (
major aspects): b (
focused):
- a (
major aspects):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales): b (
appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
- The EFL Championship should be Football League Championship as it was in this time period
- "in the table partook in play-off semi-finals" - in the play-off
- No, this is just fine in BritEng. The Rambling Man ( Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
- "minutes in the second half" - I think the exact number of minutes is needed here
Route to the final
- "before goals from Birmingham's Nikola Žigić scored midway through the second half." - pretty sure the text in bold is unneeded
- "with the first leg being played the Cardiff City Stadium." - played at the
Background
- "Blackpool's top scorer was Kevin Phillips who netted 16 times during the regular season." - maybe there is a better way to word the text in bold
- I don't think so. Unless you can suggest something BritEng appropriate? The Rambling Man ( Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
- Unfortunately I am unable to do so. MWright96 (talk) 10:09, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
- "Blackpool went into the final without Gary Taylor-Fletcher whose injury during training prevented him from taking part." - what exactly was Taylor-Fletcher's injury? Is there any information about it?
- No information available about it. The Rambling Man ( Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
- "During the regular season, he had contributed ten assists and eight goals to Blackpool's season;" - repetition of the word "season"
- Wikilink substitute to Substitute (association football)
First half
- "but Nolan's pass was too heavy" - not too sure what this means
- Makes sense to me, but switched for "long". The Rambling Man ( Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
- Wikilink corners to
Corner kick
- Done. And corrected the spelling of "consecutive" while I was there... The Rambling Man ( Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
Post-match
- "nine points outside the play-offs and five points" - repetition of the word "points"
References
- "Birmingham City 2&nadsh;2 Blackpool"" - the text in bold is an error that needs to be resolved
- Reference 8 is missing the publisher
- Reference 18 is dead and needs archiving
- The same source is missing the date it was published
Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 17:22, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
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MWright96 thanks for the review again! I believe I've addressed and/or responded to each point above. Cheers.
The Rambling Man (
Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!)
09:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
- @ The Rambling Man: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 10:09, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
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MWright96 thanks for the review again! I believe I've addressed and/or responded to each point above. Cheers.
The Rambling Man (
Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!)
09:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: MWright96 ( talk · contribs) 15:19, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this article as well. It will be reviewed as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 15:19, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (
reference section): b (citations to
reliable sources): c (
OR):
- a (
reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (
major aspects): b (
focused):
- a (
major aspects):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales): b (
appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
- The EFL Championship should be Football League Championship as it was in this time period
- "in the table partook in play-off semi-finals" - in the play-off
- No, this is just fine in BritEng. The Rambling Man ( Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
- "minutes in the second half" - I think the exact number of minutes is needed here
Route to the final
- "before goals from Birmingham's Nikola Žigić scored midway through the second half." - pretty sure the text in bold is unneeded
- "with the first leg being played the Cardiff City Stadium." - played at the
Background
- "Blackpool's top scorer was Kevin Phillips who netted 16 times during the regular season." - maybe there is a better way to word the text in bold
- I don't think so. Unless you can suggest something BritEng appropriate? The Rambling Man ( Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
- Unfortunately I am unable to do so. MWright96 (talk) 10:09, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
- "Blackpool went into the final without Gary Taylor-Fletcher whose injury during training prevented him from taking part." - what exactly was Taylor-Fletcher's injury? Is there any information about it?
- No information available about it. The Rambling Man ( Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
- "During the regular season, he had contributed ten assists and eight goals to Blackpool's season;" - repetition of the word "season"
- Wikilink substitute to Substitute (association football)
First half
- "but Nolan's pass was too heavy" - not too sure what this means
- Makes sense to me, but switched for "long". The Rambling Man ( Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
- Wikilink corners to
Corner kick
- Done. And corrected the spelling of "consecutive" while I was there... The Rambling Man ( Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
Post-match
- "nine points outside the play-offs and five points" - repetition of the word "points"
References
- "Birmingham City 2&nadsh;2 Blackpool"" - the text in bold is an error that needs to be resolved
- Reference 8 is missing the publisher
- Reference 18 is dead and needs archiving
- The same source is missing the date it was published
Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 17:22, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
-
MWright96 thanks for the review again! I believe I've addressed and/or responded to each point above. Cheers.
The Rambling Man (
Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!)
09:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
- @ The Rambling Man: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 10:09, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
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MWright96 thanks for the review again! I believe I've addressed and/or responded to each point above. Cheers.
The Rambling Man (
Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!)
09:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)