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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk · contribs) 00:23, 29 September 2020 (UTC) reply

I'll do this one shortly.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 00:23, 29 September 2020 (UTC) reply

Any update on this and Talk:2008 British Grand Prix/GA1 Sturmvogel 66 Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{( talk • contribs)} 17:15, 8 October 2020 (UTC) reply

Indeed there is!

• One disambiguation link to suspension
  • Fixed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{( talk • contribs)} 07:27, 12 October 2020 (UTC) reply
• Images appropriately licensed
• Link Drivers' and Constructors' Championships in the lede
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{( talk • contribs)} 07:27, 12 October 2020 (UTC) reply
• There's a ton of overlinking here.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 02:00, 12 October 2020 (UTC) reply
  • Working Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{( talk • contribs)} 07:27, 12 October 2020 (UTC) reply
    • I'm AFK for a couple days, so I did this on my phone - I think I got them all, but the script is a little small, so I may have missed one. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{( talk • contribs)} 07:50, 12 October 2020 (UTC) reply
• So Alonso and Kovalainen swapped teams?
  • They did - is that not clear? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{( talk • contribs)} 07:27, 12 October 2020 (UTC) reply
• Can you explain what happened to Sutil during qualifying?
  • Added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{( talk • contribs)} 07:27, 12 October 2020 (UTC) reply
• safety car was reclaimed reclaimed reads very oddly to me. Perhaps "left the track" or some other less jargony term would work better.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 02:13, 12 October 2020 (UTC) reply
  • Changed. I don't think reclaim is a super jargon term, but I suppose if you've never seen Motorsport, it might be difficult to realise the race controller brings the car off the track. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{( talk • contribs)} 07:27, 12 October 2020 (UTC) reply
    • I've made the above changes. Thanks for taking a look at this one for me. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{( talk • contribs)} 07:50, 12 October 2020 (UTC) reply