If Hink likes it, I'd like to do this as well. Please note that I'm a bit busy at the moment, so the review might take a while. Cheers! --JavaHurricane11:27, 11 April 2020 (UTC)reply
In the future, I suggest you only start the GA review when you're able to do the review ;) No need to "claim" a review. But I appreciate it whenever you'll get around to it! ♫
Hurricanehink (
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15:21, 14 April 2020 (UTC)reply
JavaHurricane - I see you're still editing a lot of other articles, but not able to review this despite multiple times you would. I'm going to ask for a second reviewer if you don't review it soon. Not to rush you, but you've claimed this GAN for seven days and haven't reviewed it at all. In the future, could you not "claim" my GA nominations if you don't intend to review them within a week? Sorry to be harsh, but I'd like to see this reviewed. ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk)
14:31, 18 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Hurricanehink, actually my computer is not working, and it is admittedly tedious to do a GAN on mobile. I've went through the article and have everything on mind. Just wait a day or so, I'll do it on my mobile. Sorry! JavaHurricane14:34, 18 April 2020 (UTC)reply
it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Not a problem, but I find it unusual that you have listed the relief efforts in the seasonal summary part, which is appreciable.
I felt that there would be too much to include in any of the individual storm articles. I think in the future, we could use a section like this, almost as a mini
Floods in Madagascar kind of article, which happen almost every year. Ditto for Floods in India being covered in the season summary. ♫
Hurricanehink (
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13:38, 23 April 2020 (UTC)reply
"From December 2006 to April 2007, a series of floods and storms affected Madagascar, including Bondo, Clovis, Favio, Gamede, Indlala, and Jaya" - unless I am missing something, it should be "flooding storms".
"During the second half of November, convection pulsed to the north of Madagascar. The MFR classified a low pressure area as Tropical Disturbance 2 on November 26." Do the sources mention any relationship between the convection and the LPA?
The entirety of Bondo' MH summary needs to be rewritten.
Entirety? I cover most of the details on the storm, so I'm not sure why the whole thing needs to be redone. I added a date reference and expanded on the history near northern Madagascar, but I'm not sure what else is wrong with it. ♫
Hurricanehink (
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13:38, 23 April 2020 (UTC)reply
I think that is pretty much it! A rather good read, though I think you could have done better
Hink, knowing your standards and quality. Â On hold for now, pending the addressal of the aforementioned issues. JavaHurricane16:42, 21 April 2020 (UTC)reply
If Hink likes it, I'd like to do this as well. Please note that I'm a bit busy at the moment, so the review might take a while. Cheers! --JavaHurricane11:27, 11 April 2020 (UTC)reply
In the future, I suggest you only start the GA review when you're able to do the review ;) No need to "claim" a review. But I appreciate it whenever you'll get around to it! ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk)
15:21, 14 April 2020 (UTC)reply
JavaHurricane - I see you're still editing a lot of other articles, but not able to review this despite multiple times you would. I'm going to ask for a second reviewer if you don't review it soon. Not to rush you, but you've claimed this GAN for seven days and haven't reviewed it at all. In the future, could you not "claim" my GA nominations if you don't intend to review them within a week? Sorry to be harsh, but I'd like to see this reviewed. ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk)
14:31, 18 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Hurricanehink, actually my computer is not working, and it is admittedly tedious to do a GAN on mobile. I've went through the article and have everything on mind. Just wait a day or so, I'll do it on my mobile. Sorry! JavaHurricane14:34, 18 April 2020 (UTC)reply
it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Not a problem, but I find it unusual that you have listed the relief efforts in the seasonal summary part, which is appreciable.
I felt that there would be too much to include in any of the individual storm articles. I think in the future, we could use a section like this, almost as a mini
Floods in Madagascar kind of article, which happen almost every year. Ditto for Floods in India being covered in the season summary. ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk)
13:38, 23 April 2020 (UTC)reply
"From December 2006 to April 2007, a series of floods and storms affected Madagascar, including Bondo, Clovis, Favio, Gamede, Indlala, and Jaya" - unless I am missing something, it should be "flooding storms".
"During the second half of November, convection pulsed to the north of Madagascar. The MFR classified a low pressure area as Tropical Disturbance 2 on November 26." Do the sources mention any relationship between the convection and the LPA?
The entirety of Bondo' MH summary needs to be rewritten.
Entirety? I cover most of the details on the storm, so I'm not sure why the whole thing needs to be redone. I added a date reference and expanded on the history near northern Madagascar, but I'm not sure what else is wrong with it. ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk)
13:38, 23 April 2020 (UTC)reply
I think that is pretty much it! A rather good read, though I think you could have done better
Hink, knowing your standards and quality. Â On hold for now, pending the addressal of the aforementioned issues. JavaHurricane16:42, 21 April 2020 (UTC)reply