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Reviewer: MWright96 ( talk · contribs) 08:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
Going to review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 08:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (
reference section):
b (citations to
reliable sources): c (
OR):
- a (
reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (
major aspects): b (
focused):
- a (
major aspects):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales): b (
appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
- "took part in play-off semi-finals;" - shouldn't it be the play-off semi-finals;
- Not necessarily, it's not been in a problem in the other 20 or so GAs, and it reads fine to me. The Rambling Man ( Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:34, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
Route to the final
- Should East London be wikilinked?
- Who was involved in the defensive mix up that allowed Kuqi to score?
- "Preston North End played Derby County, the first leg being played at" - repetition of the word "played"
- "after David Nugent beat Lee Camp in the Derby goal after picking up a flicked pass from Chris Sedgwick." - I beleive the first use of the word "after" can be changed to an appropriate relevant alternative word
- Wikilink header to the approrpiate article on the first mention
Background
- Repka's full name should be mentioned here and not in the summary since it is the first time he is mentioned
- Maybe clarify it was Brian O'Neill's right eye that got headbutted?
- Wikilink Football League Division Two
- Fixed name and linked. The Rambling Man ( Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
- "Preston had played in the second tier of English football since gaining promotion in the 1999–2000 season as champions of Football League Division Two, and had not played" - repetition of "played"
- "Winning the play-off final was estimated to be worth" - estimated by whom?
- "who represented the West Riding County Football Association." - not mentioned by ESPN. Another source will be needed to verify this
- West Riding is Yorkshire, so I'll use the BBC source. The Rambling Man ( Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
Summary
- Wikilink Millennium Stadium and free kick
- Delink Tomáš Řepka and just his surname is sufficent
- "twisting his knee." - right knee
- Why was Walker booked just after sustaining his knee injury?
- None of the sources state it explicitly but he carried the ball out of the area so I would assume it was handball/denying a goal-scoring opportunity, but as it's not verifiable, it can't go in. The Rambling Man ( Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:52, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
Post-match
- Wikilink Premier League to 2005–06 FA Premier League and Championship to 2005–06 Football League Championship
Reference
- Reference 21 is missing the newspaper that printed the story
Am putting the review hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 11:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
- Cheers,
MWright96, all addressed and/or responded to. Thanks for your review.
The Rambling Man (
Hands! Face! Space!!!!)
16:54, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
- @ The Rambling Man: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 17:34, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
- Cheers,
MWright96, all addressed and/or responded to. Thanks for your review.
The Rambling Man (
Hands! Face! Space!!!!)
16:54, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: MWright96 ( talk · contribs) 08:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
Going to review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 08:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (
reference section): b (citations to
reliable sources): c (
OR):
- a (
reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (
major aspects): b (
focused):
- a (
major aspects):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales): b (
appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
- "took part in play-off semi-finals;" - shouldn't it be the play-off semi-finals;
- Not necessarily, it's not been in a problem in the other 20 or so GAs, and it reads fine to me. The Rambling Man ( Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:34, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
Route to the final
- Should East London be wikilinked?
- Who was involved in the defensive mix up that allowed Kuqi to score?
- "Preston North End played Derby County, the first leg being played at" - repetition of the word "played"
- "after David Nugent beat Lee Camp in the Derby goal after picking up a flicked pass from Chris Sedgwick." - I beleive the first use of the word "after" can be changed to an appropriate relevant alternative word
- Wikilink header to the approrpiate article on the first mention
Background
- Repka's full name should be mentioned here and not in the summary since it is the first time he is mentioned
- Maybe clarify it was Brian O'Neill's right eye that got headbutted?
- Wikilink Football League Division Two
- Fixed name and linked. The Rambling Man ( Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
- "Preston had played in the second tier of English football since gaining promotion in the 1999–2000 season as champions of Football League Division Two, and had not played" - repetition of "played"
- "Winning the play-off final was estimated to be worth" - estimated by whom?
- "who represented the West Riding County Football Association." - not mentioned by ESPN. Another source will be needed to verify this
- West Riding is Yorkshire, so I'll use the BBC source. The Rambling Man ( Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
Summary
- Wikilink Millennium Stadium and free kick
- Delink Tomáš Řepka and just his surname is sufficent
- "twisting his knee." - right knee
- Why was Walker booked just after sustaining his knee injury?
- None of the sources state it explicitly but he carried the ball out of the area so I would assume it was handball/denying a goal-scoring opportunity, but as it's not verifiable, it can't go in. The Rambling Man ( Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:52, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
Post-match
- Wikilink Premier League to 2005–06 FA Premier League and Championship to 2005–06 Football League Championship
Reference
- Reference 21 is missing the newspaper that printed the story
Am putting the review hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 11:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
- Cheers,
MWright96, all addressed and/or responded to. Thanks for your review.
The Rambling Man (
Hands! Face! Space!!!!)
16:54, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
- @ The Rambling Man: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 17:34, 2 October 2020 (UTC)
- Cheers,
MWright96, all addressed and/or responded to. Thanks for your review.
The Rambling Man (
Hands! Face! Space!!!!)
16:54, 2 October 2020 (UTC)