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Be consistent in how you present Queens Park Rangers: i.e. it should be just one term and not two as you use currently (QPR and Rangers)
Lead
"The redevelopment of Wembley Stadium meant that Football League play-off final matches were played in Cardiff between 2001 and 2006." - meant that Football League play-off final matches held between 2001 and 2006 were played in Cardiff.
"who finished fourth during the league season, and Cardiff City, who finished sixth. " - reptition of finished
Route to the final
"finishing between 3rd and 6th to enter the play-offs" - numbers between three to six should be spelt out per
MOS:NUMBERS
"Rangers midfielder Richard Langley equalised before being sent off with ten minutes remaining after a second bookable offence" - what was the circumstance that led to Langley's sending-off?
Pre-match
""a club game, not an international fixture." - missing the closing quotation marks in this section of text
"First Minister of Wales Rhodri Morgan criticised the decision commenting that anthems shouldn't be a part of the match but if they were then both should be played." - should not
"striker Paul Furlong stated that he believed" - try stated his belief to make it slightly less wordy
"Cardiff chairman Hammam stated before the game" - you don't need to mention that Hamman was chairman of Cardiff shortly after another paragraph
"However, Holloway rubbished Hammam's call" - Rubbished is informal
Summary
" QPR goalkeeper Chris Day produced an impressive save" - Per
WP:PEACOCK, avoid words such as impressive
References
Refs 15 & 18 should have HighBeam Research as the source of your information
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Football, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Cardiff, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Cardiff-related articles on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
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Be consistent in how you present Queens Park Rangers: i.e. it should be just one term and not two as you use currently (QPR and Rangers)
Lead
"The redevelopment of Wembley Stadium meant that Football League play-off final matches were played in Cardiff between 2001 and 2006." - meant that Football League play-off final matches held between 2001 and 2006 were played in Cardiff.
"who finished fourth during the league season, and Cardiff City, who finished sixth. " - reptition of finished
Route to the final
"finishing between 3rd and 6th to enter the play-offs" - numbers between three to six should be spelt out per
MOS:NUMBERS
"Rangers midfielder Richard Langley equalised before being sent off with ten minutes remaining after a second bookable offence" - what was the circumstance that led to Langley's sending-off?
Pre-match
""a club game, not an international fixture." - missing the closing quotation marks in this section of text
"First Minister of Wales Rhodri Morgan criticised the decision commenting that anthems shouldn't be a part of the match but if they were then both should be played." - should not
"striker Paul Furlong stated that he believed" - try stated his belief to make it slightly less wordy
"Cardiff chairman Hammam stated before the game" - you don't need to mention that Hamman was chairman of Cardiff shortly after another paragraph
"However, Holloway rubbished Hammam's call" - Rubbished is informal
Summary
" QPR goalkeeper Chris Day produced an impressive save" - Per
WP:PEACOCK, avoid words such as impressive
References
Refs 15 & 18 should have HighBeam Research as the source of your information