Reviewer:Yellow Evan (
talk·contribs) 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
Since we have so many GAN's and I want a 2002 worldwide GT, I will take this one
YEPacificHurricane 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
"The 2002 North Indian Ocean cyclone season was a below active season in annual cycle of tropical cyclone formation. " remove the "in anuall part as it is just confusing.
YEPacificHurricane 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
" Activity in the North Indian Ocean then went dormant for over five months" why? (it's due to the monsoon, find a source for that)
YEPacificHurricane 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
Wow, that was much easier than I thought.--
12george1 (
talk) 02:06, 29 April 2013 (UTC)reply
Add a little more to the Oman cyclone's section like.
YEPacificHurricane
"being Tropical Cyclone Errol, which was in the South Indian Ocean within the Australian region area of responsibility.[4]" no, Erol was in TCWC Jakarta's area of responsibility (make you link and spell out TCWC).
YEPacificHurricane 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
"Several hours later, the Joint Typhoon Warning Center issued a tropical cyclone formation alert for the system" abrivated JTWC here and abbreviate TCFA.
YEPacificHurricane 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
"The Joint Typhoon Warning Center issued a Tropical Cyclone Formation Alert (TCFA) late on October 22 for a depression located about 235 km (145 mi) east-southeast of Chennai, Tamil Nadu. " same thing. TFA and JTWC should be non-linked and abbreviated in their first useage.
YEPacificHurricane 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
Add more to the Bangdlesh cyclone. It killed hundreds after all.
YEPacificHurricane 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
Eh, there's not much more. Also it didn't actually cause "hundreds" of deaths. I realized I made a mistake on the article by assuming all of those missing died. So I have to cap it "at least 51", as that is the highest variable figure. Nonetheless, I did add a little bit more info.--
12george1 (
talk) 02:06, 29 April 2013 (UTC)reply
"By 1800 UTC on December 23, the Joint Typhoon Warning Center initiated advisories on " don't spell out JTWC IMO as said above.
YEPacificHurricane 13:03, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
Reviewer:Yellow Evan (
talk·contribs) 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
Since we have so many GAN's and I want a 2002 worldwide GT, I will take this one
YEPacificHurricane 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
"The 2002 North Indian Ocean cyclone season was a below active season in annual cycle of tropical cyclone formation. " remove the "in anuall part as it is just confusing.
YEPacificHurricane 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
" Activity in the North Indian Ocean then went dormant for over five months" why? (it's due to the monsoon, find a source for that)
YEPacificHurricane 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
Wow, that was much easier than I thought.--
12george1 (
talk) 02:06, 29 April 2013 (UTC)reply
Add a little more to the Oman cyclone's section like.
YEPacificHurricane
"being Tropical Cyclone Errol, which was in the South Indian Ocean within the Australian region area of responsibility.[4]" no, Erol was in TCWC Jakarta's area of responsibility (make you link and spell out TCWC).
YEPacificHurricane 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
"Several hours later, the Joint Typhoon Warning Center issued a tropical cyclone formation alert for the system" abrivated JTWC here and abbreviate TCFA.
YEPacificHurricane 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
"The Joint Typhoon Warning Center issued a Tropical Cyclone Formation Alert (TCFA) late on October 22 for a depression located about 235 km (145 mi) east-southeast of Chennai, Tamil Nadu. " same thing. TFA and JTWC should be non-linked and abbreviated in their first useage.
YEPacificHurricane 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
Add more to the Bangdlesh cyclone. It killed hundreds after all.
YEPacificHurricane 13:02, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply
Eh, there's not much more. Also it didn't actually cause "hundreds" of deaths. I realized I made a mistake on the article by assuming all of those missing died. So I have to cap it "at least 51", as that is the highest variable figure. Nonetheless, I did add a little bit more info.--
12george1 (
talk) 02:06, 29 April 2013 (UTC)reply
"By 1800 UTC on December 23, the Joint Typhoon Warning Center initiated advisories on " don't spell out JTWC IMO as said above.
YEPacificHurricane 13:03, 23 April 2013 (UTC)reply