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Reviewer: Adam4267 ( talk) 15:28, 15 August 2011 (UTC)
A good article is—
Looks good so far, I will go into it more comprehensively soon. Adam4267 ( talk) 15:29, 15 August 2011 (UTC)
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Lead
Should be football not association football.
the annual UEFA Super Cup IS contested.
Does the nationality of the clubs need to be in the lead twice? If so then Bayern Munich of Germany and Liverpool of England doesn't sound right to me. How about (between) German club Bayern Munich and English club Liverpool
All three of Liverpool's previous appearances should be mentioned.
The score of Bayern's penalty shoot-out need not be mentioned.
Repetition of team when talking about Alves and Valencia. Change one (Alves I think) to club.br>
Background
There are no sources for Bayern or Liverpool winning the previous years Champions League and Uefa Cup.
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20:39, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
If possible can we have sources for each of the previous Super Cup appearances rather than just RSSSF. Adam4267 ( talk) 20:39, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
Both sides had played several matches already, which was unusual as the Super Cup would normally have been the first significant match the two teams had played.
Source needed
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20:08, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
Bayern had already played four matches in the 2001–02 Fußball-Bundesliga. They were fifth in the table after they had won two matches, drew one and lost one match. Need to re-write this. It does not read correctly. Adam4267 ( talk) 20:08, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
As winners of the 2000–01 FA Cup, Liverpool faced Manchester United in the 2001 FA Charity Shield; Liverpool beat United 2–1.[4] They had also played one match in the 2001–02 FA Premier League; a 2–1 win over West Ham United. Should be
Liverpool had defeated Manchester United 2-1 in the Charity Shield. They also beat West Ham 2-1 in their first Premier League match of the season.
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20:16, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
There were also doubts over whether Steven Gerrard would be fit to play after an ankle injury meant he (had) not played for Liverpool this season.[7] Not exactly what the source says, need to clear it up. Also missing word. Adam4267 ( talk) 20:39, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
Summary
No further goals were scored and the referee blew for full-time with the final score 3–2 to Liverpool. Is this necessary?
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20:39, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
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Post-match
Should be balanced between Liverpool and Bayern. Nothing about how this match affected Bayern, or how they did in Europe next season, or how they did in Intercontinental cup. There is a lot about what Liverpool hoped to do next season, but it needs to be said what they actually achieved.
I'm thinking that the interview with Owen is maybe not relevant. It seems like he isn't really talking about the Super Cup. Adam4267 ( talk) 20:39, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
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If possible could you try and link to match reports for the previous super cup wins.
Adam4267 (
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20:08, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Adam4267 ( talk) 15:28, 15 August 2011 (UTC)
A good article is—
Looks good so far, I will go into it more comprehensively soon. Adam4267 ( talk) 15:29, 15 August 2011 (UTC)
1.
Lead
Should be football not association football.
the annual UEFA Super Cup IS contested.
Does the nationality of the clubs need to be in the lead twice? If so then Bayern Munich of Germany and Liverpool of England doesn't sound right to me. How about (between) German club Bayern Munich and English club Liverpool
All three of Liverpool's previous appearances should be mentioned.
The score of Bayern's penalty shoot-out need not be mentioned.
Repetition of team when talking about Alves and Valencia. Change one (Alves I think) to club.br>
Background
There are no sources for Bayern or Liverpool winning the previous years Champions League and Uefa Cup.
Adam4267 (
talk)
20:39, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
If possible can we have sources for each of the previous Super Cup appearances rather than just RSSSF. Adam4267 ( talk) 20:39, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
Both sides had played several matches already, which was unusual as the Super Cup would normally have been the first significant match the two teams had played.
Source needed
Adam4267 (
talk)
20:08, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
Bayern had already played four matches in the 2001–02 Fußball-Bundesliga. They were fifth in the table after they had won two matches, drew one and lost one match. Need to re-write this. It does not read correctly. Adam4267 ( talk) 20:08, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
As winners of the 2000–01 FA Cup, Liverpool faced Manchester United in the 2001 FA Charity Shield; Liverpool beat United 2–1.[4] They had also played one match in the 2001–02 FA Premier League; a 2–1 win over West Ham United. Should be
Liverpool had defeated Manchester United 2-1 in the Charity Shield. They also beat West Ham 2-1 in their first Premier League match of the season.
Adam4267 (
talk)
20:16, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
There were also doubts over whether Steven Gerrard would be fit to play after an ankle injury meant he (had) not played for Liverpool this season.[7] Not exactly what the source says, need to clear it up. Also missing word. Adam4267 ( talk) 20:39, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
Summary
No further goals were scored and the referee blew for full-time with the final score 3–2 to Liverpool. Is this necessary?
Adam4267 (
talk)
20:39, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
Details
Post-match
Should be balanced between Liverpool and Bayern. Nothing about how this match affected Bayern, or how they did in Europe next season, or how they did in Intercontinental cup. There is a lot about what Liverpool hoped to do next season, but it needs to be said what they actually achieved.
I'm thinking that the interview with Owen is maybe not relevant. It seems like he isn't really talking about the Super Cup. Adam4267 ( talk) 20:39, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
2.
If possible could you try and link to match reports for the previous super cup wins.
Adam4267 (
talk)
20:08, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
3.