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As part of my expansion of the Divisional history, I've restored my statement that the Division was disbanded in September 1943 with 1st Armoured Brigade surviving as an independant brigade. As 1st Armoured Brigade was a pre-existing unit prior to September 1943 it is not correct to state that the division was 'downsized to a brigade group'. Rather, most of the Division's units (including the Divisional HQ) were disbanded with the surviving units coming under the command of 1st Armoured Brigade. My source for this is Australian Armour. A History of the Royal Australian Armoured Corps 1927-1972 by Major General R.N. Hopkins (see page 129). -- Nick Dowling 05:41, 3 December 2005 (UTC)
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@ Berserker276: – IRT your recent rewording of the lead to “The 1st Armoured Division was an armoured division" per diffs here [1] and here [2] as I said in my previous edit summary this wording is redundant and is pretty much the same as writing "an apple is an apple" and does not tell our readers anything they shouldn't already know from the article title. Equally, your insertion of flags into the infobox seems contrary to MOS:INFOBOXFLAG and general consensus elsewhere on their use. For these reasons I have partially reverted your changes again (some of the infobox additions do seem helpful though). I have now changed the first sentence to read: "The 1st Armoured Division was an armoured formation" which at least is not tautological in entirety even if it still is partially redundant. If you still feel that the lead needs to be changed I request you take the time to discuss your reasons here per WP:Bold, Revert, Discuss and develop a consensus before making this change again. Thanks in advance. Anotherclown ( talk) 10:26, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
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As part of my expansion of the Divisional history, I've restored my statement that the Division was disbanded in September 1943 with 1st Armoured Brigade surviving as an independant brigade. As 1st Armoured Brigade was a pre-existing unit prior to September 1943 it is not correct to state that the division was 'downsized to a brigade group'. Rather, most of the Division's units (including the Divisional HQ) were disbanded with the surviving units coming under the command of 1st Armoured Brigade. My source for this is Australian Armour. A History of the Royal Australian Armoured Corps 1927-1972 by Major General R.N. Hopkins (see page 129). -- Nick Dowling 05:41, 3 December 2005 (UTC)
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@ Berserker276: – IRT your recent rewording of the lead to “The 1st Armoured Division was an armoured division" per diffs here [1] and here [2] as I said in my previous edit summary this wording is redundant and is pretty much the same as writing "an apple is an apple" and does not tell our readers anything they shouldn't already know from the article title. Equally, your insertion of flags into the infobox seems contrary to MOS:INFOBOXFLAG and general consensus elsewhere on their use. For these reasons I have partially reverted your changes again (some of the infobox additions do seem helpful though). I have now changed the first sentence to read: "The 1st Armoured Division was an armoured formation" which at least is not tautological in entirety even if it still is partially redundant. If you still feel that the lead needs to be changed I request you take the time to discuss your reasons here per WP:Bold, Revert, Discuss and develop a consensus before making this change again. Thanks in advance. Anotherclown ( talk) 10:26, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
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