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Reviewer: Usernameunique ( talk · contribs) 09:16, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Route to the final
with the first leg being played at
— As in other articles, I would explicitly mention the two-legged tie.a disagreement with manager Martin O'Neill
— Any details?- No, not in the source. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:07, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
made it 1–0 to the visitors. Leicester City won the tie 3–1 on aggregate and progressed to the final.
— Looks like we're missing quite a bit here—three goals aren't even mentioned.- Typo, the agg win was 1–0. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:07, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Shaun Newton capitalised on a rebound from Palace's goalkeeper Nigel Martyn
— What minute?the on-loan Kenny Brown
— Where was he on loan from?overhead kick
— Link to bicycle kick?-
David Whyte — Suggest "[name of team]'s
David Whyte"
- Tweaked to avoid quick repetition. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:07, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Background
Iwan Roberts with 19 goals and Emile Heskey on 7
— Any non-league goals?- Looked again and found Roberts had a League Cup goal, Heskey just league, but added. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:17, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
sustained a rib injury
— Any details (broken, bruised, etc.)?- Just "damaged" so no detail. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:17, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Robins
— Should have full name/link.Dyer was second-top scorer with a total of 14 goals
— All in the league?O'Neill would make a bid for Keith O'Neill
— No relation, I assume?an elbow injury ... Hopkin remained an injury doubt
— Any details?- No extra detail. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:17, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Summary
Leicester made their final substitution of the game to bring on 6 ft 7 in (2.01 m) tall goalkeeper Zeljko Kalac in anticipation of a penalty shootout
— General question: I take it you can't substitute the goalie once the extra period is over? What if he gets injured during the shootout?- Great questions. You can't do it "tactically" but if the goalkeeper is injured, you can. As long as you have enough substitutions remaining... I think! Take a look at the article, it's really interesting, especially points 12 through 16.
The Rambling Man (
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15:23, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
- Got it, thanks. Take a look at which article? -- Usernameunique ( talk) 07:22, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
- Great questions. You can't do it "tactically" but if the goalkeeper is injured, you can. As long as you have enough substitutions remaining... I think! Take a look at the article, it's really interesting, especially points 12 through 16.
The Rambling Man (
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15:23, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Claridge
— Needs full name/link.With less than a minute remaining, Claridge struck the winning goal from a Julian Watts header, and eleven seconds later, the referee blew the final whistle.
— No injury time, huh?In the final minute of the additional 30-minute period ... With less than a minute remaining
— The implication is that these moves happened in the same minute. Any word on how many seconds apart?- None, it's altogether possible they happened in the same minute. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:23, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
- For a two-hour game, this section feels fairly short. Anything that could be added?
- It is short but as you can see from the variety of sources in the article, I've scoured for mostly everything. I'll take another look and see. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:23, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
- Turns out I'd already checked Gale, ProQuest, BNA and Google. Nothing more to add sadly. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:35, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
O'Neill was given a £5 million budget to make additions to the Leicester City squad
— To compete in the Premiership?- I imagine that would be the case! The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:23, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
References
- #10 — Suggest sfn footnote, and moving Smith & Taylor to a "Bibligraphy" section.
- #13, 14 — Likewise, suggest moving to "Bibliography" and using sfn footnotes.
- #15, 16, 18, 22, 24, 33 — No paid subscription needed (may I suggest removing that from your newspapers.com template?)
- #29 — Paid subscription needed
Overall
- The Rambling Man, over to you. -- Usernameunique ( talk) 09:16, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
- Usernameunique all addressed/responded to. Cheers. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:35, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
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Usernameunique anything more needed here?
The Rambling Man (
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07:17, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
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The Rambling Man, I just need to read through your responses and edits. I'll take a look now. --
Usernameunique (
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07:20, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
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The Rambling Man, looks good, passing now. One question above. Also, take a look at the edit I just made re: reference formatting, and see if you like it—it's a slightly more elegant method, I think. But undo the edit if you don't like it. --
Usernameunique (
talk)
07:28, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
- It's fine, thanks. Responded above. Cheers for the review. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 07:31, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
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The Rambling Man, looks good, passing now. One question above. Also, take a look at the edit I just made re: reference formatting, and see if you like it—it's a slightly more elegant method, I think. But undo the edit if you don't like it. --
Usernameunique (
talk)
07:28, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
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The Rambling Man, I just need to read through your responses and edits. I'll take a look now. --
Usernameunique (
talk)
07:20, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Usernameunique ( talk · contribs) 09:16, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Route to the final
with the first leg being played at
— As in other articles, I would explicitly mention the two-legged tie.a disagreement with manager Martin O'Neill
— Any details?- No, not in the source. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:07, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
made it 1–0 to the visitors. Leicester City won the tie 3–1 on aggregate and progressed to the final.
— Looks like we're missing quite a bit here—three goals aren't even mentioned.- Typo, the agg win was 1–0. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:07, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Shaun Newton capitalised on a rebound from Palace's goalkeeper Nigel Martyn
— What minute?the on-loan Kenny Brown
— Where was he on loan from?overhead kick
— Link to bicycle kick?-
David Whyte — Suggest "[name of team]'s
David Whyte"
- Tweaked to avoid quick repetition. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 14:07, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Background
Iwan Roberts with 19 goals and Emile Heskey on 7
— Any non-league goals?- Looked again and found Roberts had a League Cup goal, Heskey just league, but added. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:17, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
sustained a rib injury
— Any details (broken, bruised, etc.)?- Just "damaged" so no detail. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:17, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Robins
— Should have full name/link.Dyer was second-top scorer with a total of 14 goals
— All in the league?O'Neill would make a bid for Keith O'Neill
— No relation, I assume?an elbow injury ... Hopkin remained an injury doubt
— Any details?- No extra detail. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:17, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Summary
Leicester made their final substitution of the game to bring on 6 ft 7 in (2.01 m) tall goalkeeper Zeljko Kalac in anticipation of a penalty shootout
— General question: I take it you can't substitute the goalie once the extra period is over? What if he gets injured during the shootout?- Great questions. You can't do it "tactically" but if the goalkeeper is injured, you can. As long as you have enough substitutions remaining... I think! Take a look at the article, it's really interesting, especially points 12 through 16.
The Rambling Man (
Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!)
15:23, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
- Got it, thanks. Take a look at which article? -- Usernameunique ( talk) 07:22, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
- Great questions. You can't do it "tactically" but if the goalkeeper is injured, you can. As long as you have enough substitutions remaining... I think! Take a look at the article, it's really interesting, especially points 12 through 16.
The Rambling Man (
Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!)
15:23, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
Claridge
— Needs full name/link.With less than a minute remaining, Claridge struck the winning goal from a Julian Watts header, and eleven seconds later, the referee blew the final whistle.
— No injury time, huh?In the final minute of the additional 30-minute period ... With less than a minute remaining
— The implication is that these moves happened in the same minute. Any word on how many seconds apart?- None, it's altogether possible they happened in the same minute. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:23, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
- For a two-hour game, this section feels fairly short. Anything that could be added?
- It is short but as you can see from the variety of sources in the article, I've scoured for mostly everything. I'll take another look and see. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:23, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
- Turns out I'd already checked Gale, ProQuest, BNA and Google. Nothing more to add sadly. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:35, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
O'Neill was given a £5 million budget to make additions to the Leicester City squad
— To compete in the Premiership?- I imagine that would be the case! The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:23, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
References
- #10 — Suggest sfn footnote, and moving Smith & Taylor to a "Bibligraphy" section.
- #13, 14 — Likewise, suggest moving to "Bibliography" and using sfn footnotes.
- #15, 16, 18, 22, 24, 33 — No paid subscription needed (may I suggest removing that from your newspapers.com template?)
- #29 — Paid subscription needed
Overall
- The Rambling Man, over to you. -- Usernameunique ( talk) 09:16, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
- Usernameunique all addressed/responded to. Cheers. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:35, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
-
Usernameunique anything more needed here?
The Rambling Man (
Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!)
07:17, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
-
The Rambling Man, I just need to read through your responses and edits. I'll take a look now. --
Usernameunique (
talk)
07:20, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
-
The Rambling Man, looks good, passing now. One question above. Also, take a look at the edit I just made re: reference formatting, and see if you like it—it's a slightly more elegant method, I think. But undo the edit if you don't like it. --
Usernameunique (
talk)
07:28, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
- It's fine, thanks. Responded above. Cheers for the review. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 07:31, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
-
The Rambling Man, looks good, passing now. One question above. Also, take a look at the edit I just made re: reference formatting, and see if you like it—it's a slightly more elegant method, I think. But undo the edit if you don't like it. --
Usernameunique (
talk)
07:28, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
-
The Rambling Man, I just need to read through your responses and edits. I'll take a look now. --
Usernameunique (
talk)
07:20, 11 March 2021 (UTC)