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of 22,110, Manchester United's lowest home attendance of the season. - Do we need to know that it was the lowest for their season especially if it's trivial.
Reading that section, I feel like their is a slight bias towards Manchester United as we don't know who Red Star Belgrade was missing from their lineup for this match.
Granted, but I simply haven't been able to find that information for Belgrade, and it seems silly to remove information we do know, just because we don't know something else. Note that the neutrality criteria states "it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each." I am not convinced that including factual information about one team and not the other is considered as representing a viewpoint. GA doesn't require comprehensiveness, only that the article "addresses the main aspects of the topic".
Harriastalk07:35, 12 May 2020 (UTC)reply
Match
...captain
Steve Bruce stepped up to take the penalty kick, which he placed to the right of Red Star goalkeeper
Zvonko Milojević; however, Milojević guessed... - A bit over-detailed as you could just say that his penalty shot was blocked by
Zvonko Milojević or something along those lines without going into detail
Manchester United played better after the goal, and had further chances... - Probably drop the "played better after the goal, and" as it sort of sounds like a bit of
WP:WEASEL, so instead do something like "Manchester United had further chances..."
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
of 22,110, Manchester United's lowest home attendance of the season. - Do we need to know that it was the lowest for their season especially if it's trivial.
Reading that section, I feel like their is a slight bias towards Manchester United as we don't know who Red Star Belgrade was missing from their lineup for this match.
Granted, but I simply haven't been able to find that information for Belgrade, and it seems silly to remove information we do know, just because we don't know something else. Note that the neutrality criteria states "it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each." I am not convinced that including factual information about one team and not the other is considered as representing a viewpoint. GA doesn't require comprehensiveness, only that the article "addresses the main aspects of the topic".
Harriastalk07:35, 12 May 2020 (UTC)reply
Match
...captain
Steve Bruce stepped up to take the penalty kick, which he placed to the right of Red Star goalkeeper
Zvonko Milojević; however, Milojević guessed... - A bit over-detailed as you could just say that his penalty shot was blocked by
Zvonko Milojević or something along those lines without going into detail
Manchester United played better after the goal, and had further chances... - Probably drop the "played better after the goal, and" as it sort of sounds like a bit of
WP:WEASEL, so instead do something like "Manchester United had further chances..."
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.