The first thing is the "W suffix" that is attached to the end of the tropical depressions monitored by JTWC in 2008 however when i checked the 1982 JTWC Annual Tropical Cyclone Report i found that they didnt attach them so the sentance that says the W suffix is attached needs to be removed
Jason Rees (
talk) 23:58, 30 October 2008 (UTC) DoneThegreatdr (
talk)
04:33, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Whats a Tropical depression, Tropical Storm, Typhoon and Supper Typhoon? - Whilst i know what they are, someone new to this article might not have the technical knowledge to know what they are so i suggest adding in the JMA and the SSHS Scales. (I think i did a template for the JMA Scale when i did one for the Australian Regions scales and RSMC La Reunions)
Jason Rees (
talk)
00:07, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Im not going to hold the text of the timeline not showing up against you as i know theres a massive problem with it as a whole within WPTC
Jason Rees (
talk)
00:09, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
I am concerned that you have 25 References to the 1982 ATCR whilst this is acceptable i would like to see some references from some of the other warning centers - eg: The Hong Kong Observatory has a report on the 1982 season
here.
Jason Rees (
talk) 00:44, 31 October 2008 (UTC) DoneThegreatdr (
talk)
17:25, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
The USD Damage needs to be reported in a common way as in Nancy's section you report that nancy caused "$46 million in damage (1982 USD)" Whilst in Mac's section you report that mac caused "US$1.5 million (1982 dollars)"
Jason Rees (
talk) 00:44, 31 October 2008 (UTC) DoneThegreatdr (
talk)
04:41, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
If we are going to link to the Eastern Pacific in the lead then we also need to link to south of the equator
Jason Rees (
talk) 00:48, 31 October 2008 (UTC) Done Dealt with this by removing link from lead.
Thegreatdr (
talk)
04:38, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
As for the lead it should be fine after those tweaks that i have suggested be made - Though i would add a new section called season summuary to the article
Jason Rees (
talk) 01:06, 31 October 2008 (UTC) DoneThegreatdr (
talk)
16:35, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Yep you have the only thing that needs doing is the Season Summuary needs Spliting off from the list of stroms but since thats only a minor thing ill pass the article - Well done
Jason Rees (
talk)
17:34, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
It is done. Thanks for the review. I left a comment on the
1939 Pacific typhoon season talk page (the other Pacific typhoon season GA) to add a seasonal summary. Before this review, I was uncertain whether or not we were using the same criteria for the Pacific typhoon season articles that we use in the Atlantic season articles.
Thegreatdr (
talk)
17:59, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
To be honest i prefer this format than the Atlantic one for the season articles allthough we need to have a look at the post 2000 PTS format as we have so many storms/depressions that the JMA do not upgrade
Jason Rees (
talk)
18:11, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
The first thing is the "W suffix" that is attached to the end of the tropical depressions monitored by JTWC in 2008 however when i checked the 1982 JTWC Annual Tropical Cyclone Report i found that they didnt attach them so the sentance that says the W suffix is attached needs to be removed
Jason Rees (
talk) 23:58, 30 October 2008 (UTC) DoneThegreatdr (
talk)
04:33, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Whats a Tropical depression, Tropical Storm, Typhoon and Supper Typhoon? - Whilst i know what they are, someone new to this article might not have the technical knowledge to know what they are so i suggest adding in the JMA and the SSHS Scales. (I think i did a template for the JMA Scale when i did one for the Australian Regions scales and RSMC La Reunions)
Jason Rees (
talk)
00:07, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Im not going to hold the text of the timeline not showing up against you as i know theres a massive problem with it as a whole within WPTC
Jason Rees (
talk)
00:09, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
I am concerned that you have 25 References to the 1982 ATCR whilst this is acceptable i would like to see some references from some of the other warning centers - eg: The Hong Kong Observatory has a report on the 1982 season
here.
Jason Rees (
talk) 00:44, 31 October 2008 (UTC) DoneThegreatdr (
talk)
17:25, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
The USD Damage needs to be reported in a common way as in Nancy's section you report that nancy caused "$46 million in damage (1982 USD)" Whilst in Mac's section you report that mac caused "US$1.5 million (1982 dollars)"
Jason Rees (
talk) 00:44, 31 October 2008 (UTC) DoneThegreatdr (
talk)
04:41, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
If we are going to link to the Eastern Pacific in the lead then we also need to link to south of the equator
Jason Rees (
talk) 00:48, 31 October 2008 (UTC) Done Dealt with this by removing link from lead.
Thegreatdr (
talk)
04:38, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
As for the lead it should be fine after those tweaks that i have suggested be made - Though i would add a new section called season summuary to the article
Jason Rees (
talk) 01:06, 31 October 2008 (UTC) DoneThegreatdr (
talk)
16:35, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
Yep you have the only thing that needs doing is the Season Summuary needs Spliting off from the list of stroms but since thats only a minor thing ill pass the article - Well done
Jason Rees (
talk)
17:34, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
It is done. Thanks for the review. I left a comment on the
1939 Pacific typhoon season talk page (the other Pacific typhoon season GA) to add a seasonal summary. Before this review, I was uncertain whether or not we were using the same criteria for the Pacific typhoon season articles that we use in the Atlantic season articles.
Thegreatdr (
talk)
17:59, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply
To be honest i prefer this format than the Atlantic one for the season articles allthough we need to have a look at the post 2000 PTS format as we have so many storms/depressions that the JMA do not upgrade
Jason Rees (
talk)
18:11, 31 October 2008 (UTC)reply