"..to the Dutch, .." I think this should be "to the Dutch team".
"..with AZ winning.." Noun plus -ing.
"Three months later, AZ faced quarter-final opponents Lokeren of Belgium.." "faced their quarter-final opponents"?
First leg
Trim Eric Gates.
No need for "however".
"..had been recently been.." Too many beens.
Link handball. And maybe rephrase to "..following a handball by Hovenkamp."
Trim Paul Mariner and Alan Brazil.
What's the deal with substitutes? The only ones listed are those used; are the others not known? (This also applies to the second leg.)
Good question. I'll take another look at that. I suspect they're not listed anywhere reliable, just those that were used would have been recorded in the press.
The Rambling Man (
Staying alive since 2005!) 14:39, 3 April 2020 (UTC)reply
That's a shame. I can't see anything on a quick look around either. No worries.
Harriastalk 15:03, 3 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Second leg
Any detail we can include on the fact that the match was played at the Olympic Stadium, rather than AZ's home ground?
"Ipswich took 6,000 travelling fans to the game." Note the overall attendance here too for comparison.
Trim Johnny Metgod.
Link unmarked.
Post-match
Consider putting the note inline, I think it is pertinent enough to include.
"Bobby Robson left the club.." Trim Bobby Robson, and clarify the club.
"AZ '67 went on to reach the semi-final of the 2004–05 UEFA Cup;[47] Ipswich made it to the third round in the 2001–02 UEFA Cup." Are they the team's only subsequent performances, or their best ones?
I think the {{clear}} template would work better in the Notes section: there would be less whitespace.
References
All looks good, no evidence of copyvio or close para-phrasing.
Nice neat and tidy article. I won't bother to put it on hold, as you're likely to deal with these issues pdq anyway.
Harriastalk 14:18, 3 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Harrias all done and a couple of replies above. Sadly, removing the note has removed the notes section and thus the clear template can't go in there. I really want to retain the image though. Any thoughts? Anything else needed?
The Rambling Man (
Staying alive since 2005!) 14:48, 3 April 2020 (UTC)reply
I've moved the template into the See also section for a minor improvement, but short of expanding the Post-match section, I don't think there's much else that can be done.
Harriastalk 15:03, 3 April 2020 (UTC)reply
"..to the Dutch, .." I think this should be "to the Dutch team".
"..with AZ winning.." Noun plus -ing.
"Three months later, AZ faced quarter-final opponents Lokeren of Belgium.." "faced their quarter-final opponents"?
First leg
Trim Eric Gates.
No need for "however".
"..had been recently been.." Too many beens.
Link handball. And maybe rephrase to "..following a handball by Hovenkamp."
Trim Paul Mariner and Alan Brazil.
What's the deal with substitutes? The only ones listed are those used; are the others not known? (This also applies to the second leg.)
Good question. I'll take another look at that. I suspect they're not listed anywhere reliable, just those that were used would have been recorded in the press.
The Rambling Man (
Staying alive since 2005!) 14:39, 3 April 2020 (UTC)reply
That's a shame. I can't see anything on a quick look around either. No worries.
Harriastalk 15:03, 3 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Second leg
Any detail we can include on the fact that the match was played at the Olympic Stadium, rather than AZ's home ground?
"Ipswich took 6,000 travelling fans to the game." Note the overall attendance here too for comparison.
Trim Johnny Metgod.
Link unmarked.
Post-match
Consider putting the note inline, I think it is pertinent enough to include.
"Bobby Robson left the club.." Trim Bobby Robson, and clarify the club.
"AZ '67 went on to reach the semi-final of the 2004–05 UEFA Cup;[47] Ipswich made it to the third round in the 2001–02 UEFA Cup." Are they the team's only subsequent performances, or their best ones?
I think the {{clear}} template would work better in the Notes section: there would be less whitespace.
References
All looks good, no evidence of copyvio or close para-phrasing.
Nice neat and tidy article. I won't bother to put it on hold, as you're likely to deal with these issues pdq anyway.
Harriastalk 14:18, 3 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Harrias all done and a couple of replies above. Sadly, removing the note has removed the notes section and thus the clear template can't go in there. I really want to retain the image though. Any thoughts? Anything else needed?
The Rambling Man (
Staying alive since 2005!) 14:48, 3 April 2020 (UTC)reply
I've moved the template into the See also section for a minor improvement, but short of expanding the Post-match section, I don't think there's much else that can be done.
Harriastalk 15:03, 3 April 2020 (UTC)reply