" Throughout the state, more than 150 houses sustained flood damage in several counties. In addition, numerous major highways were closed, including portions of U.S. Routes 59, 87, 90, and then-185, and Texas State Highways 35 and 71.[9][10] " no need for "then" by the "185".
YEPacificHurricane
"These conditions caused the roof of a house to collapse, resulting in 6 fatalities." to "Six people died when a roof of a house collapsed".
YEPacificHurricane 03:57, 15 June 2013 (UTC)reply
" The storm crossed the state and eventually crossed Long Island before making another landfall in Connecticut.[15]" change one of the "Crossed" to "passed over".
YEPacificHurricane 03:57, 15 June 2013 (UTC)reply
"Thereafter, the storm began weakened and fell to tropical storm intensity while south of Nova Scotia later that day. Cleo curved east-northeastward on August 20. " "began weakened" to "began to weaken".
YEPacificHurricane 03:57, 15 June 2013 (UTC)reply
"While passing through The Bahamas, several small island communities in the central regions of the country were leveled, but no damage toll or fatalities were reported.[3]" damage toll? Change "damage toll" to "damage total".
YEPacificHurricane 03:57, 15 June 2013 (UTC)reply
Cut a few lines back on Donna. It's section needs to go on a diet, it's not Sandy after all.
I'm gonna try, but this storm was devastating and its impacts were widespread.--
12george1 (
talk) 04:23, 15 June 2013 (UTC)reply
"Outside the Gulf Coast of the United States, rain fell in other states, but no damage is known to have occurred.[27] "how many other states? 7437?
YEPacificHurricane 03:57, 15 June 2013 (UTC)reply
" Throughout the state, more than 150 houses sustained flood damage in several counties. In addition, numerous major highways were closed, including portions of U.S. Routes 59, 87, 90, and then-185, and Texas State Highways 35 and 71.[9][10] " no need for "then" by the "185".
YEPacificHurricane
"These conditions caused the roof of a house to collapse, resulting in 6 fatalities." to "Six people died when a roof of a house collapsed".
YEPacificHurricane 03:57, 15 June 2013 (UTC)reply
" The storm crossed the state and eventually crossed Long Island before making another landfall in Connecticut.[15]" change one of the "Crossed" to "passed over".
YEPacificHurricane 03:57, 15 June 2013 (UTC)reply
"Thereafter, the storm began weakened and fell to tropical storm intensity while south of Nova Scotia later that day. Cleo curved east-northeastward on August 20. " "began weakened" to "began to weaken".
YEPacificHurricane 03:57, 15 June 2013 (UTC)reply
"While passing through The Bahamas, several small island communities in the central regions of the country were leveled, but no damage toll or fatalities were reported.[3]" damage toll? Change "damage toll" to "damage total".
YEPacificHurricane 03:57, 15 June 2013 (UTC)reply
Cut a few lines back on Donna. It's section needs to go on a diet, it's not Sandy after all.
I'm gonna try, but this storm was devastating and its impacts were widespread.--
12george1 (
talk) 04:23, 15 June 2013 (UTC)reply
"Outside the Gulf Coast of the United States, rain fell in other states, but no damage is known to have occurred.[27] "how many other states? 7437?
YEPacificHurricane 03:57, 15 June 2013 (UTC)reply