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Reviewer: Yellow Evan ( talk · contribs) 04:00, 19 February 2017 (UTC) reply

Will do. Y E ^{Pacific Hurricane} 04:00, 19 February 2017 (UTC) reply

• Pipe "city controller" with comptroller in the first sentence. Y E ^{Pacific Hurricane} 03:46, 27 February 2017 (UTC) reply
  • Done. -- Coemgenus ( talk) 18:45, 2 March 2017 (UTC) reply
• "Under the 1951 City Charter, " what's a "City Charter? Y E ^{Pacific Hurricane} 03:46, 27 February 2017 (UTC) reply
  • Linked it to Municipal charter.-- Coemgenus ( talk) 18:45, 2 March 2017 (UTC) reply
• "Voters in the 1st district also voted for city council in 1957 in a special election " where is the 1st district? Y E ^{Pacific Hurricane} 03:46, 27 February 2017 (UTC) reply
  • I added a clause describing the location ( South Philadelphia) and a map. -- Coemgenus ( talk) 18:45, 2 March 2017 (UTC) reply
• newspapers.com is overlinked in the references. Y E ^{Pacific Hurricane} 03:46, 27 February 2017 (UTC) reply
  • Fixed. -- Coemgenus ( talk) 18:45, 2 March 2017 (UTC) reply

@ Coemgenus:. Ping. Y E ^{Pacific Hurricane} 17:13, 2 March 2017 (UTC) reply

@ Yellow Evan: thanks for the review! I think I've resolved these issues. -- Coemgenus ( talk) 18:45, 2 March 2017 (UTC) reply

@ Yellow Evan: Ping. -- Coemgenus ( talk) 19:32, 7 March 2017 (UTC) reply